That was really deep. I would REALLY like to see another chapter or two to this. Loved it! MAke more!

Dat was good! I liked it a lot! I think Zack and Aeris (Aerith in Japanese I geuss) make a better couple thatn Cloud and Aeris. It was really good! Reno's the best!_

I really, really liked this. Many people have called Aeris a whore, a slut, and so on.. but I think this fits her character well. And your Zack is very sweet (and a flirt, but that's the way we like it) this is great.

That was umm, diffrent. I never thought about Aeris like that. You're fic was really great, and really well writen. But Aeris and Cloud are meant to be together! Claeris forever! Hahahahha, ahem... anyway, keep up the great work, kay. Bye!_

Oooh, is this gonna turn into an Aerith/Zack? I hope so! D I like this fic already, and I'm glad you didn't make Aeris a prostitute just to bash her. Well, I hope there's a chapter 2 soon!

Incredible. I am impressed by the originality and creativity of this story. Distressing, yet you gave it a glimmer of hope that moves me immensely. You're certainly a wonderful author :)

ooooooooo daaaaaaamn... Right on. You had me going there, I thought it was tifa... Good story, you write well... put up some more of your work!

I LOVE your writing! This was no exception; and the ending took me by complete surprise. Hope to see more from you. :D

That was weird, but VERY good LOL.

Well, this fiction was rather different, Teef. Aeris's actions in this work seem rather plausible too - if you're broke and a female, you're not exactly going to make a lot of money selling flowers for a gil a piece, are you? I rather liked your use of language and what you ended up doing - introducing Aeris to Zack. I was wondering, do you plan on writing another chapter on this? Not much has been written about the relationship Zack or Aeris shared, or how they broke up either. I think it would fit the bill rather well. But anyway, the choice is up to you. This was a wonderful piece of writing, and you were very brave to post it up. I commend you.

Wow. That was weird, but it had good content, i think. Oh, and by the way. I hate it when they say that Tifa's a slut just because she's got big boobs, and wears short skirts. I unfortunately have a pretty big rack, and yes I do like skirts as well - as do lots of other girls. Does that mean that we're all sluts? NOOOOOO!

::jaw drops in awe:: you say *i'm* a good writer? ::snorts:: you never cease to amaze me! i like it, a lot! this piece really does give me a better insight on what aeris's enigmatic past might have been like. do keep writing. and no people, tifa gainsborough didn't portray aeris as a prostitute just for the fun of it!

That ending sure surprised me! I honestly never suspected it! Which is good because that's what this type of fic calls for. Awesome job. Sure wish I could write like you!

Wow. I like it. A new look on Aeris for sure. Very nice.

great one, Tifa. Keep it up and thanx again for helping me with my fic.