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| Violet Shadows 2008-08-21 ch 1, | abuseReally nice feel to it, though I've never seen Kino's Journey (I've heard about it, but I haven't gotten around to it.) I especially like the line in the end about the Nobody's being good people once...it fit. |
| Daisuke1991 2008-05-31 ch 1, | abuseNice it was a pretty cool cross over |
| Ao Kudo 2008-05-30 ch 1, | abuseI like the ending.makes me feel whole yet not complete.fitting too and calm. U should make a sequel sometime. |
| shoster 2008-05-03 ch 1, | abuseI love how you wrote this fic, I could realy feel like its going to be a chapter in the anime. I also loved Kino's explanation. Great fic |
| randomperson 2008-02-10 ch 1, anon. | abusevery interesting. everything fit very well and i especially liked the poetic beginning. i also noticed how you never mentioned Kino's gender directly, but managed to use her name in such creative ways |
| Among the Audience 2008-01-15 ch 1, | abuseThat was... really cool. It flowed really well, and i loved her interaction with the other character... *sniff* poor Roxas... |
| Turtle Kid 2007-10-06 ch 1, | abuseI agree that it fits more with Kino's Journey. It even has the same format, which I absolutely love, by the way. This was so sad, in an empty kind of way, which is how the Nobodys generally make me feel. Thank you for writing this! |
| satachiha08 2007-09-08 ch 1, | abuseConfusing, psycological, and thrilling. Classic Kino beauty. |
| The Light's Refrain 2007-08-11 ch 1, | abuseWow, this is awesome for a crossover O_O. I like how you described the Nobodies, and how Kino reacted to each of them. This really does feel like a world that Kino would visit in the series. And I really liked the line where Kino saidhow they were good people once because they were so injured by their emptiness. Cya! |
| Kidalana 2007-07-19 ch 1, | abusephangirly title or no a title's a title. The story was nice. Flowed very naturally and didn't seem strained. (if that makes sense in the least bit) Thank you for sharing your writing with us. ^^ |
| idk 2007-07-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseIt was delightful to see a Kino's Journey fanfic since there aren't many, especially one written by you. |