Nice to know that in true friendship nothing changes!

It was great. very eloquent and thoughtful. I like it:)

Oh I loved this story! I was short, but to the point and very touching. My only complaint is the switching from present to past tense. I dislike reading in present tense unless it is in 1st person, as it is very awkward. But you still captured the emotions of Legolas wonderfully. Thanks for sharing.

NiRi

M I like this. The spacers between paragraphs is weird - are they supposed to be there?? But yes, this is really interesting. I think you could add more to it though - it's rather murky, narrative-wise. Some things could be made a lot clearer, but I got the gist of it and I enjoyed it thoroughly. Kudos :)