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PadawanCassy
2009-10-13 . chapter 22
Hi!
That was really good. Keep up the wonderful work.

Cassy
Lady Evans Potter
2009-10-13 . chapter 22
Hi, just want you to know that I enjoyed this story. I liked the way you wrote it, as well as the plots in it. Keep writing ^^
Adventure-Seeking-Juliet
2008-11-29 . chapter 22
cool
Allie-grrl4
2008-08-25 . chapter 1
This is very good so far, but does Darth Vader need his breathing mask thing? or does he look human but just has yellow eyes?
Allie-grrl4
2008-08-23 . chapter 14
update soon
minoki
2008-07-15 . chapter 22
that was real nice
john
2008-01-23 . chapter 6
Piett wasn't an admiral until esb
Laetitia du Chatelet
2008-01-09 . chapter 22
hehe its a nice sweet story :} Great job~
FireChildSlytherin5
2007-12-26 . chapter 22
Cute fic. Is there a seguel?
ChaosCarlos
2007-11-05 . chapter 22
Great story, can't wait to see more of their life together and Luke's budding feelings for Mara. Also lets not forget Anakin's reaction when Leia brings home a stray Captain and asks if she can keep him.

Again, great story!
SkyBlueSw
2007-11-03 . chapter 22
The end was very cute when Luke asking his Dad how he asked his Mom out.
SidiousSith
2007-11-01 . chapter 22
HAHA! I love it.. the summarized version of the prequels:

Anakin leaned back into his seat, proving that he was comfortable. Clinking of plates in the sink could be heard from the dining area. “First off,” he started, “I didn’t ask your mother out,” his straight face twisted into a memorable grin, “I told her I was going to marry her when I was nine years old, and she was fourteen. She thought I was a silly little boy, of course—then I didn’t see her for ten years, and then…” his face became straight again, “I was assigned to protect her from an attempt to kill her, and we fell in love.”

Brilliantly done! :D An excellent end to an excellent story. Especially with tying Mara in like that.

May the Force be with You!
wAcKaMoLe911
2007-10-29 . chapter 22
Aw, what a cute ending!
absolutly LOVED it. sad it ended, but, for all places to end it, it was good.
can't WAIT to get started on dark obi...*smiles evilly*
heehee
you did a FANTASTIC job on this one and i'm very proud (oh geesh, i sound like i'm 70...oh well)
luke and mara! :)
Ranayana
2007-10-29 . chapter 1
Wonderful ending! =) The only thing that was missing was "...and so they lived happily ever after." XD LOL Great!
Alien Roxi
2007-10-29 . chapter 22
Wonderful ending! :-)
I think your writing style is good-you write well. I can't wait for you to post the new stories you mentioned!

~Alien Roxi~
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