..Why doesn't this have more reviews? It deserves a veritable mountain of reviews.
That was your best work, in my opinion. It was absolutely flipping spectacular and enthralling.
All the metaphors gave the story a terrific, almost poetic feel.
And strangely? The whole thing made total, perfect sense. Every word seemed to have meaning, and..
That last section. Gah, that last section. If I must single out a favorite bit, then I'd have to choose there. It hits really, really hard.
Magnificent work, really. This was gorgeous, and beyond amazing.

woah, I think this is great. I liked how you used the colours. I can guess what you wanted to symbolize with them but it is more faint and not really tangible. I just have to favour it =).

myrdschaem, sorry for being to lazy to log in

That was beautiful. I'm near speachless.
I actually read this, left, came back, and read it again and I still can't think of anything of substance to say.

That was so ... poetic and beautiful and amazing. and also depressing but that's what makes it so poetic and beautiful and amazing. I loved it!

Oh...My...God...All I can say is this, Beautiful...

I don't know how I did it, but I think that I actually understood that whole thing.
Everyone died and in the end, after Sasuke got his revenge, he was left alone looking in the mirror asking himself who he was.




Awesome.



And if I'm wrong, please don't destroy my happy delusions. XD

My thoughts are that he was looking in a mirror he had broken. It was depressing sorta. Sorta. Anyway, I've read a couple of your other stories. Good job with those! Keep it up!

that was really awesome! very poetic! fairly depressing, but whats a story without the depressing moments? crap, thats what! this was really good! cant wait for your next fanfic! keep up the great work!

I love it! it's awesome! So beautifully written! and the way you use colors is just (for lack of a better word cause my brains muddled) AMAZING! Slightly depressing, but that makes every story better! Good job!

--Kit

I liked it. I thought the use of colors to express emotion, people, and situations was very well written! It was rather depressing, but still I really liked it. Is there anyway you could continue the story?? I don't think so, but if you come up with a way coolness!! TTYL!