Wow. This is... I don't have words.

I think I like it, though it unsettles me. Well written.

One of my favorite pairings. I like all the analogies. Keep writing.

Good way to describe their relationship! You had many good analogies and sceneries.

Mimi-chan!

*Gwyn burst into happy tears*

I'm touched. TQ. Your birthday is in August 10th?

Don't worry about the stress thingy. Kinda have it managed. I think... Been typing a few more paragraphs yesterday. I can't believe I'm actually putting fluff in the Nationals. Urgh...must edit paragraphs...XD

Anyway, who are you calling 'old'? *huffs*. I am most certainly not old. I do not have wrinkles like Tezuka does (Tezuka throws Gwyn a glare), and I most certainly don't have grey hair like Atobe does (Atobe: Hey! This is ore-sama's natural hair colour!), so I am still very young. Only 12 years old. *grins innocently*

::cough:: Interesting hints in the fic. Good thing you made it quite vague, or you'd have to put it under M instead. Dang...I think I'm going to have a nosebleed...XD

TezuRyo = LOVE!

-Gwyn