When I first read the description I thought "This is going to be terrable". Then I read, this is probobly the best short story I have ever read! Have you ever considered writing a full out fanfic? I think you should write one, something like this. Maybe how Link gets back into the twilight realm, you know?

Anyways p.m. Me if you feel like writing something like that. I'll be ur beta k?

Wow, I've never heard Link give such a sophisticated and complex speech before ( then again he doesn't usually talk), but I liked it! Great story and I'm in denial at the games end as well. Why did Midna have to leave, WHY!?

Haha, lol. Loved it all, every moment of all three stories.

Haha, very nice. I mean both the stories when I say that.

I agree the ending was very distastful. good job on the story but i would have to suggest you work on your description of what is happening and of the characters and characterize them more so.

im in denial to
great story by the way

Don't worry, I'm in denial too. Great story!

I love this!!

This is so good, your stories are amazing! :D I love Linda fics, my favourite pairing ever...and yes, I hated the game's ending too...stupid writers...

This is going on my favourites. Keep it up!

God, i loved this fic so much!

I feel u there! I hated the ending>_< It was too sad! Seeing that they would never be together again, it broke my heart! But the good news is, I got my emotions back^_^ Yeya!...I'm being wierd again0-0

Haha, Yes, you are in complete Denial of the games ending. But, you know, if Zelda would have actually talked Midna out of it, she would have stayed.

i really liked that story, but it was kinda confusing

Aren't we all? lol.

This story... It makes me smile. Non-stop in a goofy, silly, I'm-a-six-year-old-who-just-got-candy way. Its just so cute and adorable, and Link's such a dork and I love it! Yes, Link's dorky childishness is just so cute and squeeful.

Also, your Zelda is almost enough to make me like the one in the game. Almost. "Let's see, who talked you out of it?"

Yup, definitely love this story. I wish that the game hadn't ended like it did, and this was a strong alternative. Nice work!