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| bookworm2011 2008-07-07 ch 10,  | abuseGreat job! I absolutely love this series. Brilliantly written. |
| Miss Late Bloomer 2006-02-09 ch 10, | abuseA very charming story. I must admit, I've never pictured Jonathan in a romantic light, but you made it very easy to imagine, and yes, Amanda is certainly his match. I always enjoyed the interactions of the other couples: Ardeth/Rebecca, Evy/Rick. I disagree with what one reviewer said how Jonathon had an OC feel. Not at all. You kept him in character, just expanded it, for the purposes of the tale. Nothing wrong with that! |
| Katherine Dark 2004-12-04 ch 10, | abuseHi, This was a fairly complicated storyline, and I think it might have been more effective if you'd stretched it out. The end of Imhotep and the death of Beni seemed almost offhand. This was an interesting story with ten chapters. I bet it would have been a fabulous story at 20 or 25 chapters, with more suspense built in. This was written three years ago - I wonder what your writing might be like today? Try writing something else, you have great ideas. Katherine |
| cackle 2003-02-03 ch 10, | abusegreat story |
| per 2002-04-08 ch 10, anon. | abuselove whole series esp because its finished and I dont have to wait for updates. Oh and the skilled writing helps to. |
| Artemis 2001-11-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseWhy do I have this feeling that Amanda is going to be some thing like Jonathan with breasts? |
| Liselle 2001-11-25 ch 10, anon. | abuseIt's not that I don't like Jonathan acting all racy-like, but your characters just seemed to be really OOC, and Amanda is such a Mary-Sue. Some nice sexy bits, though... keep it up. |
| Sasami 2001-10-31 ch 10, anon. | abusePLEASE continue this series! Your stories are awesome! :-) |
| Britt 2001-09-15 ch 10, anon. | abusei luv it!!!!! hehehe!! u are such a great writer!! i think the "Sands" series should continue! Alex should look like Rick! *sigh* lol! and when Ahmed's older...He should look like Ardeth...*bigger sigh* lol! :) |
| Annabelle Lauren 2001-09-12 ch 10, anon. | abuseAww! I am such a sucker for happy endings! Great story (again)! Even if you don't continue sands, I really hope to see more from you, because you are such an awesome writer!-Anna Lauren |
| brainfear 2001-09-12 ch 10, | abuseGood story. I like Ardeth and Rebecca as a couple. They are the ones that make this series stand out. |
| SB Syd 2001-09-12 ch 10, | abuseWow! Very cool! You have to continue!!! It's sooo good!! Please!!!!! |
| Jonathan's Baby 2001-09-11 ch 1, | abuseI have one question. Are you my long lost sister? I LOVE it! |
| Annabelle Lauren 2001-09-07 ch 9, anon. | abuseI haven't been back here in so long! Agh! Anyway awwwwww is all I can say after this past chapter! I just love it! Please write more soon, I am so addicted! Thanks for the update on the release of TMR! Love Ya! -Anna Lauren |
| enctv 2001-09-03 ch 1, | abuseHi, I love your "sands" series. Is this the end for Sands of Fortune. It is so entertaining and you really give all the characters great description and characteristics. I especially love their relationships. Please keep writing |