Nice cliffhanger! I suppose I'm lucky that this story is completed and I don't have to wait for updates. :P

That episode where Claire and Nathan were hanging out in Mexico kind of cemented the fact that they probably won't ever really have a true father-daughter relationship, but be more like friends or uncle-niece. (Ironic.) So I'm glad to see you're taking that route.

I love this story. It's the best Peter/Claire fic that I've read. I was just re-reading it for the third time, and I wanted to tell you that you have a lot of talent as a writer. Keep up the good work.

LOL the last chapter made me really emotional. I love your writing style, stuff like this would normally confuse me but you wrote it perfectly :)

Usually when someone attemps to write a story like this, it gets terribly confusing and messy, however you managed to write it in a very artistic and simple way, which was awesome as I didn't have to stop and think about what was going on every ten seconds :P.

You're a great writer and although this is only the second Paire fic of yours that i've read, I LOVE your work.

Kudos.

Wow! What a fantastic story! So thorough in everything! Absolutely wonderful _ I really enjoyed staying up late to read it. There were a couple of times that there were typos where there should have been italics (half word ) but otherwise I wouldn't change anything!

i remember reading this fic a WHILE back & was looking for it again. it's so well written and an interesting twist to the cannon. love it... i'm def favoring this one!

Wow...

That's a great story...

And excellent use of time travel there, very, very good.

I really did enjoy this story very much, and would so like to see how THE Peter deals with all the $#!7 coming his way. It would be epic.

Good work!

made me smile all the way (: definetly unique

this was such an amazing story and when you think about it, Claires actions in season one fit PERFECTLY with your story ESPECIALLY the "secretive little smile" I LOVE Peter and Claire and i LOVE this storY! great job with it )

This was such a beautiful story, and one of the best Heroes Paire ones I've read in a long while. I really loved how you worked in the butterfly effect and the uniqueness of the Paire relationship. I also liked that it was a bit of a mystery-type thing; perhaps not who the father was, but how it came to be. I completely forgot about the whole time/space travel thing.

The fact that there are a million different people if you believe that space is a continuum is so well-used in this story, and I loved the ending line about how Peter was just Peter, not "Past Peter, Right Now Peter or Future Peter." I also did like that you did it from a canon perspective, since obviously one of the draws about Paire is that it's nontraditional, forbidden love. At least for me.

Thank you for so eloquently capturing the chemistry of Peter and Claire from onscreen to in your writing. I enjoyed the story very much and hope to see more from you!

Great story! I really loved it! I was confused a little bit but it all got cleared up.

Wow, this story was amazing! Poignant and well-written, heartbreaking yet heartwarming... I loved it, I really, really loved it.

I wish I could think of something else to say, but I'm afraid I'm pretty much speechless. :)

- WS

So I'm just rereading this on account of loving this story so very much, and I noticed you left the thingies off an italics thing.

Also, how could you forget (your A/n) about one of, if not the, best paire stories I've ever read?

OHMAWGA. This was amazing. Holy crap. It was so beautiful. I am in love with it. Oh God. My brain has melted from the awesome this fic is made of.

I've just read this from start to finish. I loved it, i was shocked when i saw that you didn't have 100's of reviews becuase the standard of writing is really good their isn't any mistakes at all.