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| Navig8R 2008-05-26 ch 1, | abuseThis was good reading. You take particular care to have the characters stay true to their personas on the show. I was a little rattled by the confusion with taking her car from the bar, but arriving at her apartment in his Tahoe. Needs a little edit there... |
| jafarjasmineforever2005 2008-04-27 ch 1, | abuseAwesome! |
| grissom07 2007-07-25 ch 1, | abusecontinue i want to know more... does he go back to saras? |
| amanda 2007-07-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseplease continue does he have a drink and go to saras? |