Reviews for Seeing All or Nothing

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Dare Deville 2008-05-08 ch 27,	abuseThat. Was. Amazing!! You did a wonderful job on this story and all your others. Your an exellent writer! Sorry I didn't review for a long time but I've been busy. Keep up the great work!^_^
Yoru Inu 2008-01-19 ch 27,	abuseOne word for you: "WOW". But that is never enough for a writer, now is it? Thus I will elaborate (and take more space and more of your time). I can say I never saw Jade's death coming until a few chapters ago, and I have to admit that the ending was damn good. Not your typically "they lived happy ever after" kind of thing. I liked it, from beginning to end. It's one of the few stories were pairings between original characters have captivated me so, So much that I didn't mind Link being mute and Hyrule a little bit twisted, and though I liked Kado a whole lot (cute guy he is) I found the Jade x Kenny pairing much more enjoyable (I guess I ahve a twisted mind, but who cares?) I could ramble and ramble about what I liked of that pairing, but that would take too much space, forget time. I read "Seeing Truth" a while ago, before "Seeing Lies" was even there, then I found it and started reading, half-way through I stopped for reasons that evade me, only yesterday I found it again and well, here I am, finishing the whole trilogy. Why didn't I review? I guess you can say I'm a lazy person, but this one really, really deserved it. Now, you asked on the reader's thoughts on the epilogue, didn't you? Here they are. I found it sad. Really sad, but I suppose that's what make it unique. And I found this new Zelda and Impa very good, an excellent contrast of what you made them seen as in "Seeing Truth" and "Seeing Lies". Same with Kenny's parents, Ryuichi and Isabella. Over all I liked the development of the plot through the three stories, it was an excellently job, and I didn't see the "game" part coming either. I liked what happened between Jade and Kenny probably more than that what happened between Kado and Jade, not that I didn't like 'em, but I'm a sucker for star-crossed lovers. I think it is obvious what I would like to see more of, and I can't really think of anything that I wouldn't like to see. Anyways, loved the story, and the three of them are going to my fav's lists.
The Silverdark Knight 2008-01-14 ch 27,	abuseIf I ever fully understand this story, I will die a happy man. As it is just let me know the plot, like a summary. Gets annoying when I can't get the subtlety through my skull.
esther 2007-12-28 ch 27, anon.	abuseOh my god i luv this story!! i was up all night reading it until my mum caught me and took my computer off me. hehe oh well i finally finished i couldnt stop reading it. kinda sad though her dying and all. your gonna keep writing arent u? u better or else...ok i guess there's not much i can do it was just a figure of speech.i really like the jadexkenny thing! awesome.i have one little question did u base the jade on yourself? dont know why i'm asking i was just wondering! i'll keep reading! promise cya & happy new year x
esther 2007-12-27 ch 7, anon.	abuseokay i'm a little confused. is link zelda's brother cause wen she was in a coma zelda and link were in love and i thought they were from different families?confusing! anyway i still love it and i'm gonna keep reading it x
kairi irl 2007-12-23 ch 27,	abusewow, hehe I knew it xD The ghost thing was great-sad, but great. Predictable? a bit. Kado and Isabella marrying...I'm with Jade on that one how in the world did that play out? Oh well hopefully Isabella changed...a lot...A LOT. Sorry I still can't stand her. Love the diction you used along with the flow of confusion and yet understanding at the same time. This was really clear in my mind. It was clearer than chapter 26. And when it's clear that means it's good. i could see it from Jades POV and then third POV seeing everything happening from an onlooker's view. The mirror cracking. I love how you put that Jade can't see in color-but ghost actually CAN see in color (just a fact watch ghost whisperer :) ) Hm, this chapter was very sad and shows you just how evil royalty that is normally deemed as good, can be. Sorry I didn't review sooner, I got restricted from the computer yesterday so I wasn't even aware you had posted it yet (though i had a feeling). Again, wonderful ending to the story cleared up a lot of things and it seems you're going to change this into series are you not? The soundtrack to this whole chapter for me was "Broken Sword of Justice" This story, the whole thing so far...continues to be on my top list.
Razer Athane 2007-12-22 ch 27,	abuseOne criticism of the series, you have a tendancy to taddle off and confuse me for a while/forever... But that's just me XD Hopefully the Prequel will clarify that type of stuff XD Other than that really, congratulations on finishing another excellent fic. Can't wait for the Prequel!! Happy holidays.
SnareQueen 2007-12-22 ch 27, anon.	abuseheya! i've been reading every single one of your stories and i've gotta tell you that they're all amazing! every week i look foreward to reading the next chapter. I think the 1st one was my fav though, but all the plot twists are amazing. you're writing style's really good also, with such varied styles you manage to bring some wonderful stories to this site! i really hope that you do go on to write another in this series, i really hate beign in the suspense! good luck and keep it up!
~Lindadoodle~ 2007-12-21 ch 27, anon.	abuseI can't wait till you write the next ch. or story, I really want to know what happens to everyone. WE! I CAN'T WAIT! I LUV IT ALL!!
13Lucky13 2007-12-21 ch 27,	abuseWow that was awesome! And I nearly cried too. That was sad, but it was really great. I'd like to see Jade human again, and I'm hoping to see JadeKenny stuff. KADE rules! I hope you post the prequel soon!
ZombieDragon 2007-12-21 ch 27,	abuseHm... I guess this will be a semi-detailed review, then. ...What you can improve on? Hm...nothing, really. I really like your writing style, sure...sometimes you make crazy plot twists and turns here and there...but what fun is a story if you can't think about things throughout the day and try to figure them out? (I'm being serious here. When you first mentioned 'the game', I thought about it all day when I read it.) There is one thing I am not sure about though...Jade's a spirit/ghost here...right? Why? Wouldn't she go to heaven/hell or something? Or is this leading up to another possible sequel? ;) I would have liked to see a bit more action in this story...but that's okay, I guess. Just hollar if you need more imput from me, because i'm going to bed now. >.> I will stick around for the prequel, and it would be pretty awesome if you were to PM me when it is out. Merry Christmas, Happy Holidays, and Happy New Year to you, too!
Celedeen Takarona 2007-12-21 ch 27,	abuseThat was so cool, but you never said what happened with Oren or anything! It's like those stories that build up to the climax and end. GAH! Well, It was good, and I'm sad to see the trilogy end, but it has to, I guess. Nice reading your stories. I'll re-read them one day. ~Celedeen Takarona A reviewer who appreciates your work
True Blue 2007-12-21 ch 27, anon.	abuseOMG NO! Kado and Isabella, that so sucks i wanted him to end up with Jade...damn, but i was it coming. You know what would be cool? If the kid could see Jade like the little boy in The Messengers. Haha you have me hooked to this story. Merry X-mas and a Happy New Year! Take care, have fun, and open tonz of presents! True Blue
Lee Totema 2007-12-21 ch 27,	abuseThat was a good story, but it seems like it could continue, did you mean to make it that way?
ZombieDragon 2007-12-19 ch 26,	abuseHeh, love the chapter title! Uh...right now, I don't have any questions besides: "WTF BBQ! WHY DID YOU END IT LIKE THAT!?" but i'll save that one. >.> I'll PM you if a question pops in my head today. The only ones I have right now are obvious, and I am sure they will be answered in the epilogue... Whatever, see you at the epilogue! ^.^

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