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| numbnuts 2008-09-08 ch 15,  | abuseanother great chapter! please post more soon |
| numbnuts 2008-09-08 ch 14, | abuseGreat update! |
| Jack and Audrey lover 2008-06-22 ch 13, | abuseGreat story so far! please post more soon |
| RebeccaRoy 2008-05-21 ch 13, | abuseWow, refusing to talk to Paul, good for her, that guy is a jerk. |
| numbnuts 2008-05-15 ch 13, | abuseAnother great chapter! please post more |
| numbnuts 2008-05-15 ch 12, | abuseGreat Chapter!I love how Audrey is protective over Jack. |
| Tom Lennox 2008-05-14 ch 2, | abuseReading this makes me sad. Jack and Audrey were so promising together and now... |
| 24andMummyfan 2008-05-13 ch 11, | abuseExcellent chapter! Wonderfully written as well, i think you do the characterisations of Jack & Audrey so well- Jack determined to do something for Heller even though he has just woken up lol that is typical Jack Bauer. I thought it was sweet how Audrey is protective over Jack in her own way, not wanting him to go on the trip but I wonder if Heller will start to notice? Anyway, I'm glad you finally got a chance to update this fantastic story, I've been checking my emails religiously everyday to see if i've got an email saying a new chapter has been posted lol. I hope you update soon! Great chapter once again & you're a great writer too. |
| RebeccaRoy 2008-05-12 ch 11, | abuseI am going to be looking forward to more of this! |
| RebeccaRoy 2008-05-12 ch 10, | abuseAnother twist, brillant! |
| RebeccaRoy 2008-05-12 ch 9, | abusePoor Audrey! |
| RebeccaRoy 2008-05-12 ch 8, | abuseWow, nice little twist here! |
| RebeccaRoy 2008-05-12 ch 6, | abuseWow, Jack grins his own coffee beans? Now that is a man any woman would want! |
| RebeccaRoy 2008-05-12 ch 4, | abuseRight about now Paul needs a good swift kick between the legs. |
| RebeccaRoy 2008-05-12 ch 3, | abuseAh Chinese food, had that for dinner tonight, Peking duck, really the best from where I get it, just four blocks from home! |