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Cress
2007-11-20
ch 1,
abusePlease continue. I wonder if they'll get caught by Eve Holt or not. Also, will GM take this opportunity to go find Maeby and consummate their marriage? That will be fun too.
Ikumak
2007-07-20
ch 1,
abuseOh dear God that was hilarious! XD The part where GOD just gave himself away was so like him! And the scene where they found each other was sweet. I could just see it happening with a corny music and everything XD (which is actaully a compliment, I adore corny stuff once in a while).

Aww you've used a small part which I was planning to use as a plot idea (with them being kids and liking each other [well on GOB's part]). But ah well, someone was bound to come up with it; it's a golden idea.

Can't wait for the next part! I'm glad you don't have writer's block. Now for me to get rid of mine...
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