I'm really liking this, I know this is going to be a T/P fic but can there actually be a plot that doesn't revolve love. Like an actually DB episode please. There aren't that many out there. Besides that, this fic if F*ing fantastic

I really love this fic!
You're a good writer,

Can't wait till the next chapter..


Love,
Tanja

I'm so interested, best post DBGT fic I have read. Great plot. Pleas update soon

this story is really good. i love the characterization. i can't wait to see where it goes... i know if it was all written already, it would be one of the stories i just couldnt put down till i was finished. please keep up the excellent work!

I hate DBGT. I hate Pan. I especially hate stories involving both.

And yet.

I actually really, really like this story. It's well written. The mystery keeps me reading more. I am intrigued. I love the way you wrote Trunks and Goten. Their interaction is hilarious. It was my favourite part of DBZ and was sorely lacking in DBGT.

Well done! :) Keep up the good work.

Oh wow, this was my first fandom and I am so glad to come across this story. I hope you plan to continue as there is actual PLOT which is exciting! I look forward to more!

Ooh, evil statue from outer space. Things are going in a fairly interesting, and non-predictable (definitely a plus) direction so far. I'm looking forward to reading more!

Wow. I really like this story. Its so well written and the characters all have depth to them. So even though I'm not really into T/P pairings, I will defiantly keep reading this.

oh Bra was good you did great on her but i wanted to see more of Trunks and Pan... (this is a Trunks and Pan story right?) *pleacs say YES!!* up date soon

not bad i read all 4 chapters and there where good so update soon!

I really liked this chapter. Very good! I cannot wait to read more!

Dun! Dun! Dun! And now the drama begins! Very good chapter! I couldn't stop reading it!!

This has an excellent start. Very enticing to read. A few times I felt like I was a little lost in the description, but then I realized that I'd rather be drowning in descriptions than have none at all! Great start!

I am always looking for a good read. This looks like it will be one.

Honestly, I loved it. I think that you have an interesting writing style. I hope to follow this story. You have a very unique way of subtly building up suspense. I really hope you continue this. It's very lovely. So seriously, keep it up~