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| jillianfish 2007-12-28 ch 1,  | abuseoh, it was so sad. but oh so rewarding. a great look into logan and how he doesn't actually go through this whole thing in a deze, he knows perfectly well what's going on. oh, and can i take this opportunity to say i LOVED what you did with the parentheses and italics. I read and reread them to make sure i was getting the message. and no where did you mess up with a tense change or an extraneous word. lovely. |
| Adaren 2007-11-23 ch 1, | abuseWonderful. I know that Logan is screwed up, but you know, I can't help it -- I loved those two kids together. You did a marvelous job with this. |
| snafumama 2007-09-13 ch 1, | abuse"...he’s never wanted anything in his life the way he wants to protect her." This bit just clutched my heart. You are very aware of the characters foibles, subtelties and physicalities. It's beautiful and graceful and heartbreaking. Your take on the 61 days was spot on. Thanks. |
| Penciled In 2007-07-28 ch 1, | abuseWow, you really captured that summer. I'd kind of thought I'd never read a good VM fic again, but you just proved me wrong. You did an amazing job portraying Logan's thoughts and emotions from perhaps the most turbulent time in his life. I really enjoyed it. |
| Mac-alicious 2007-07-26 ch 1, | abuseThat was great, I loved it. We really did get royally ripped off. I mean we get a little LoVe action at the end of Season 1, miss all of the summer and come back to find she's with Duncan (thinking what the hell happened over summer to make that happen?) then finally at the very end of Season 2 they get back together only to come back on Season 3 completely screwed up again (all problems that would eventually lead to them breaking up, how many times?) So this was great. I think you held true to what it would have been like. Great job! ~Mac |
| standing-in-the-doorway 2007-07-19 ch 1, | abuseI just rewatched the season 1 finale and I totally agree that they skimped on the summer. This fic is great at filling in the blanks. |
| IluvVM 2007-07-19 ch 1, | abusewow i liked it at first i wasnt going to finish it but i am glad i did it was awesome |
| HearsTheBells 2007-07-19 ch 1, | abuseWow - this is a great story, and you paint Logan as so unbelievably vulnerable that the end just kills me. Even though I knew what was coming! I love the scene where they sneak into the Kane's pool. |