I like the last one the most. I think it's the only one that is actually a poem; the other two are ramblings formatted in a different way, like Homer's stories, a story that looks like a poem.

STOP UPSETTING ME!
I JUST GOT BACK INTO THE PHASE WHERE I COULD READ THE WORD FRED WITHOUT MENTALLY COLLAPSING AND NOW YOUVE COMPLETELY REVERTED ME!

in short...ash you're a genius.
i think ive figured out why youve got like the greatest sense of words ive ever seen. its got to be all this fantastic poetry business you do. 'palm off the blame'? um, oh my god. wowzers.

yes, thats right.

wowzers.

and thats all im going to say before i mentally collapse again--a sentence of which i think says it all. hahaha

lots o love!

cries, alot.

poor george. poor fred.

why could it not have been percy?

gah.

aw. poor snivelly.

i actually dont mind snape, hes an interesting character, and the whole having-a-crush-on-lily-evans thing is so sweet.

good poem, you need to get yourself published girlie. your too great.

so now i have a second thing to tewar up about from deathly hallows...ash that was absolutely gorgeous. wonderful wonderful wonderful.

i loved the 'save two' part. yeah, i caught on. lilys eyes. HOW PROUD ARE YOU? i figured it out. i figured poetry out of which you are offcially the supreme master of.

damn it...i like snape now. i actually LIKE him. youre such a bitch. hahaha, TOTAL jk. total.

omg i inspired you? really? no way. how?
youre such a sweetie and im gonna go check if ythe elusive email found its way back into my inbox.

lots o love!

ps. the list is almost complete
pps. so last night you signed on for exactly 1.3 seconds. you know i have my comp scream at me once you sign on and i was like 'ASH!' and the second i hit send you signed off. all simultamiously. it was so depressing...

I like it - it's good stuff. In fact I'm going to list it on my recommended fics pages and probably give it a gold star.

um, yeah...this is why i dont write poetry.
you totally kick my ass at it all up and down the block. but thats cool cause youre like WOW-amazing at it.

dont you dare delete it. ill slap you

i like that-

whoda thunk a story i started with the lines bella youre crazy could inspire such greatness.

its good stuff :D