not bad

Yes another chapter I have missed this story. As humurous and sexy as usual.

Well shit that chapter was exciting!

Ahahahaha, I found you! Hehe, this is Vykasa_lite from aarin ^_^. Everything is so much more clear after I've read it for the second time around. Iroki is still a fav (maybe b/c she's like my foil). She's so optimistic although she has OCD. Oh yea, found this through the link on your da account...thanks for the pic! Love it!

Well what a creul cliffhanger you gave us. The chapter wasn't to bad though, and the part with soubi didn't seem weird at all.

wow that was good I'm so very excited

Sweetness can't wait to see what you have up your sleave next!

it's very good kinda anoying white the name's but I like it anyway

wow this is getting really complicated but i don't feel overwhelmed so good job!

I take it you're reading the Naruto scanlations ?), seeing as you're way farther than the released manga in terms of what we know about Itachi. I feel that if a story is started before a series ends, then the author may continue with the characters as he or she began despite any plot twists that might portray them otherwise. For all we know "Tobi" could be lying (I'm trying not to give away anything in case someone who hasn't read ahead reads this review). Therefore I see no fault in continuing with "evil Itachi". I'll admit, even before the plot twist in the manga I suspected that Itachi wasn't bad, and I've never been a big fan of his sadistic persona in fanfiction, but that doesn't detract from the story so I think you should continue as you planned.

Moving beyond the author notes, this chapter does not dissapoint my hopes in any way; excellent as usual. It's a bit too short for me to sufficiently review it, according to my standards, so I'll wait a few more chapters before I more extensivly comment on your character portrayal, plot, etc... For now I maintain my high opinion of this fic and look forward to the next update! Sorry if I'm a little perfunctory today, but I'm really tired from a DDR party lastnight that went till 4am! Ugh.

~SC2718

Somehow I have mixed feelings about this fic, but all my feelings are great! I love the absolutely hot, smexyiness that is GaaSasuNaru and I think you pulled the threesome off WONDERFULLY. Ironically I just thought about this pairing for the first time today and wondered if I'd actually like it (I'd never read a threesome before). So when I saw your fic I though "why not?" And I am so glad I read it. This was almost too sexy to handle!

Also I really like the OCs in your fic, which is very VERY rare for me. And this is where I have mixed feelings. I really think your original characters could stand alone in a fully original story, but at the same time I think the Naruto characters fit very well in this plotline. So I will simply accept that by being in one fic it is easier for me to read and I shall enjoy the pure citrus flavored deliciousness!

My only criticism would be the occasional error in punctuation and spelling; but I'm anal about all that and I still make mistakes in my own writing, so I can hardly fault anyone else unless it's blatantly obvious or too distracting (which yours isn't).

So in general, awesome job, I look forward to your next update!

~SidewalkChalk2718

Aw so sweet! I can't wait for the next chappy to come out so plz update as soon as possible!

yay emo love! it was a really good chapter. poor everybody though.

It was sweet the way everyone wound up together at night . I'm glad you're going to have Naruto's past come out soon , but for some reason I feel it won't be in a discussion ...

Hello! Omg, I love this story! lol I can't wait for the next chapter, but I've been wondering, are Naoe and umm D: ah I forget his name, the guy with blond and red hair thats like the blood lusty gaara, are they going to be a pair? Cause I can imagine it now and it makes me all gooey inside lmao. Well I'm going to go surf through the rest of your storys, bye!