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| ancientesha 2008-09-28 ch 1,  | abuseaw, loved the ending. |
| SenseOfTime 2007-07-20 ch 1, | abuseReally nicely done and I think it fits perfectly with what both of them would have been like when they had to go back to Earth, 'cause we didn't really get to see a huge amount of that in the actual episodes. My only criticism is that it's a bit complicated to follow sometimes without any speech marks, but I'm not sure whether you're actually doing that purposely. Apart from that, this was brilliant! |
| StarSkimmer 2007-07-19 ch 1, | abuseLove this ficlet! The way you wrote it made it just perfect. And the ending - aww. *tears up* |
| Myriadragon 2007-07-19 ch 1, | abuseAww! I love the ending. |