| Reviews for Sexual Desires and Mating Marks |
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darkangel140able 5/22/12 . chapter 1this is so cool! please update soon |
Crazyjess09 6/8/10 . chapter 3very intresting i hope that there is more |
unwanted- angel 9/12/09 . chapter 3please, please update soon. i think i might be a 'little' obsessed. |
unwanted- angel 9/12/09 . chapter 2aww,yasha. u finally woke up! and guess what else, ur having a baby! |
unwanted- angel 9/12/09 . chapter 1being in heat can really make u do some strange things. like falling in love with your rival! i loved this. next chap, here i come |
Kagome Tashiro 6/17/09 . chapter 3update |
randum person 5/27/09 . chapter 3 awsome job please keep writing them PLEASE! |
loveyoulot 2/21/09 . chapter 3the story is so cute,but who will the othes in inuyasha grop react to the news? |
reicheruchan 4/15/08 . chapter 3i love this fan fic! best pairing ever! do update soon |
CryptidGirl 3/18/08 . chapter 3this is an awesome stroy should really write more |
Kyotohru135 2/9/08 . chapter 2yay mpreggy |
Addicted2MPreg 1/8/08 . chapter 3That was very interesting, i just Inuyasha/Koga stories, i especially love when Inuyasha gets pregnant by Koga. This truly is a gr8 story and can't wait to see more of it. So please update real soon. |
IceCreamXD 12/10/07 . chapter 2Okay well...I say yes to mpreg, since it sounds cute. Your grammar and spelling is alright, but the problem is the punctuations. You should put commas(,) when there is a slight pause, and it isn't very detailed (not a lot of description). Also, you rushed into the story way too fast. It should be slowed down a bit more. The pregnancy usually takes at least 2weeks-1month to figure out, though I guess you can say that their demons that they can figure out about the pregnancy earlier. You jumped right into the sex part, but you should have made it a little slower(the scene(smex)) And that's all, I suppose. I'm not trying to make you mad or anything. I just hope that my reasonings sorta help you with ur stories a little more. Maybe you should get a beta. And for the story...I think you should Inuyasha have cravings. You know, unusual cravings, and mood swings. _ Well, have fun with your story. |
Hoshikari 11/26/07 . chapter 1That chapter was so funny I hope the next chapter will soon be online. I like the overprotective Kouga... super Seme hihi Hope something like that will be in the next chapter Shelly |
KAYBOP1 10/31/07 . chapter 3This chp was good can't wait til da next one. |