You mean the Japanese Manga? Why would they have changed it? Takino is still her name in the Japanese anime, so I doubt that, very seriously. If you mean the manga in general, Japanese and english, then I can definately say it's false.

Yes, but chips and soda and such are common foods in Japan too. Are they really that racist? Not that there aren't racists over here, but are they?

Chiyo's name is spelled Chiyo, not Chyo.

Excellent work, I enjoyed the slight supernatural elements of the girls inside personalities actually speaking for themselves. Even so, we all know that even a bookcase to the head isn't going to stop Kimura. Anyhow, I hope to see more from you soon.

This is pretty good for a first attempt . The grammar irks me a bit, but you're new, so I'll let it slide. I look forward toward any stories you write in the future. You need to improve in some areas if you're planning on writting more. You could be really good if you try.

Wow, that dreamworld thing was prett cool. And that whole force beyond god, it all makes sense now! Too bad it's ending =( I would have liked to see what exactly the force of control is, but, maybe you'll explain in the epilogue!

Ah, splendiferous! Tomo makes the final decision but I doubt that will defer Yomi and Kagura. Gods know what shall occur...

I feel sorry for Yomi. This is my love to Tomo/Yomi coming out ofcourse but Kagura just came out of nowhere and Tomo just returns the feelings like that? I dunno I don't like that. The tomo in your story is surely different and it keeps me interested. Great update as always and I'm looking forward to more very soon. :)

I'm not a Kagura/Tomo fan I'll admit, but that wont stop me from reading your good story. I'll be rooting for Yomi ofcourse and hopefully Tomo wont be torn apart from those two. Update again soon. :)

Aww~ Kagura has the hots for Tomo! And it appears that Tomo has her doubts about whom to return affections to.

(let the grim and frostbitten black metal begin)

YOMI AND KAGURA! FIGHTING IT OUT IN THE PARK OVER WHO GETS TO LOVE TOMO! or...maybe not a fight, but I'm sure it will be epic.

I really like this story. And the part with Sakaki fantasizing about Chiyo's dad in a typhoon made me laugh really hard for some reason. I think Kagura likes Osaka. It would be an unexpected plot twist.

Oh, gods forbid...gods FORBID you ever be sent to Raspberry Heaven! Tis a horrid place with bundles of fruit and an oddly pink sky that only exemplifies the terror it may posess!

Anyhow, maybe Kagura will spill the beans next chapter. I await.

Nice update and you've got me chomping at the bit to know who Kagura likes. You make it difficult because there are no hints so I'm excited. I have my own favorite pairings for Kagura so I wanna see who her crush is soon. Good luck in school and take care. :)

Nice update and you've got me totally wondering what Kagura's crush is. Thank you so much for the happy birthday wish too~ ^_^ Take care.

Hey, I just finished reading up to chapter 10. Good stuff you have here, dramatic, fun, interesting tidbits colluded with dreamtales (which are the most interesting parts to me fr I know the theory of how what you don't wish to be revealed is revealed to you in the form of dreams) Anyhow, I await chapter 11 and I hope to see you in Mash-Up soon!