Oh God, this is absolutely amazing. I found it on another author's favorite's page and read it because I had nothing better to do and enjoyed Heavy Lies the Crown. It had DEFINITELY surpassed any and all expectations.

I love your portrayal of the characters and their relationships with each other, especially those of Hermione and Draco. You seem to have a well-developed plot and relationship set up for these characters, and I look forward to seeing how both of these things evolve and unfold.

Now, I need to cut my review short so I can tear through the remaining chapters.

:)

simply gorgeous. one of new favorites:)

XOXO,
Olga

O...MG! I'm only on chapter one, and already freaking in love with this story! :D

I adore the relationship you've set up between Harry, Ron, and Draco. I always felt that they would have been good chums would the adversity between them had been nonexistent.

But Hermione's gifts? and their mutual taste in books? AH! You are such a genius, I'm frankly speechless. How clever and creative and wonderful and...*sigh*

But above all, I love the recurring theme of Draco desiring to fall, to lose control, to feel the wind rushing around him. Beautiful, simply beautiful.

XOXO,
Olga

Wow simply amazing. I could so picture Draco standing on the cliff, ready to jump off. Wonderful

My heart, is actually breaking.
Oh wow.
Oh holy freaking wow.


This whole story, no matter how many times I read it, never ever fails to make my heart clench in actual pain for Draco, and swoon and sob and sigh all that other ridiculous things all at the same time.
A sign of a truly great writer.

x

WOW. This story is SO. AMAZING. I'm only on chapter two, but I seriously cannot WAIT to finish it. You write so eloquently and everything runs so smooth. I'm jealous. ;)
Can't wait to see where the story goes!! :)

coolest plot iv read so far!

This review is for the entire story, not just this chapter.

Wow! Absolutely brilliant story. I love how you centered on Draco's internal struggles his personality quirks. The jumping off the cliff thing and the book organizing was particularly amazing - you really capitalized on some aspects of his character that JKR delved into only slightly in the books.
I don't know why you have only 400 reviews, b/c I have read some really terrible stories with thousands of reviews.
Keep writing! I love all your stories.

This story was absolutely amazing. I loved every bit of it. I love that Ron ended up with Pansy, that Lucius was still somehow proud of his son, that Draco manned up enough to switch sides. The way their relationship blossomed was beautiful and slow enough to be believable.

Again, absolutely amazing.

Hello!

Just wanted to say its an amazing story! I really like your other ones as well, your writing style's great!

Also, having read this a many few times, I happened to notice something. Molly says Pansy's parents are coming over, but isn't her father dead and her mother in the loony bin?

I might be midding something but I just thought I'd point it out!!

Can't wait for the next update of Heavy Lies the Crown!

x

Lol. I *loved* the way Hermione worked out the pattern (and didn't eat until she'd done so!) I can see them getting on very well. I thought it was a bit of a jump to start with them all being such good friends, but if that's assumed, then the rest follows nicely. :) Ginny is so going to get on Draco's nerves! S

YAY!FRED IS ALIVE!

I love this chapter! It might be my favorite!

I really like the chapter, but I DO NOT understand how that pattern would work (though I suppose it's meant to be illogical). Could you explain it?

Can't wait to keep reading!

This was good. I really mean it. You put time and effort into your character development and it shows. What they do, what they think, who they are. it really drives the story. It is great to read a story that has received such attention. Not a single character seemed like a cookie cutter image.

Please continue writing. I think you can produce incredible work some day.