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Barb4psu
2009-09-15 . chapter 10
very cute story
loved it
SuperSekritID
2009-08-18 . chapter 10
You posted this more than two years ago now, so I don't know whether you even come here any more but I really do need to express my appreciation.

So lovely! Beautifully written. Joe doesn't turn into a two-dimensional idiot; Not a hint of sappy from Ranger; Steph remains her strong; independent self. You've kept the characters true, veered away from JE's unfortunate tendency to turn them into caricatures, and they are three-dimensional, in full technicolour.

The introduction of the plotpoint is so easy, and the whole story unfolds so naturally. Not a single cringe-worthy moment! You're a real story teller.
Jaimegirl
2009-04-26 . chapter 10
Cupcakes, guess Babes think if he's not drunk, cheating or beating Steph up, its Morelli friendly. Making him the fool while Steph cheats on him ain't friendly.
hermit hideaway
2008-07-25 . chapter 10
Great story and just mushy enough! I was really confused on chapter two though as it read almost like a different story. Maybe I just need to go back and read it again. Well great work and I love the name.
bleedingonyx
2008-06-25 . chapter 10
OMFG! I LOVED IT! RANGER IS A SEXY LATINO BEAST!
czechchickkate
2008-05-04 . chapter 1
my favorite Fan Fic yet!!
JiggyT
2008-05-03 . chapter 10
That was the sweetest story ever, definitely one of my favorites! Nice job.
tereseh
2008-04-10 . chapter 10
Aww, how sweet! Ranger and Joe babysitting together:)
Really good story! And I am glad Joe and Steph stayed friends.:)
schaefy
2008-01-21 . chapter 10
awesome! totally awesome!
dancingpiggy
2007-12-31 . chapter 10
great story! i love your writing style! can't wait to read you other stories

dancingpiggy
YorkieCrazyFool
2007-12-31 . chapter 10
Wow... Incredible story!! Once I started reading it... I couldn't STOP! You have a Wonderful talent & I can't wait to read more of your stories.

Happy New Year!
ChestnutFilly
2007-11-24 . chapter 10
aw, brilliant!
SiriusBlackFan2
2007-10-22 . chapter 10
Wow! What a wonderful story. I loved the story. You didn't make either Joe or Ranger the bad guy!

I loved it!
Lissa Babe
2007-09-21 . chapter 10
I just read this and had to tell you that this is one of my favorite fanfics ever! I am defenitely going to check out your other stories.
RSForever
2007-09-16 . chapter 10
Great story! It is nice that the triangle ended up as friends and the Ranger and Steph's "someday" finally came and now they have Mateo. So cute. I loved that Ranger gave Steph his baby bracelet. Imagine him having it after all that time. Then adding his dog tags to it. That is better than any fancy jewelry that money could buy.

I'm looking forward to your next story, but not before The Big Chill is finished. It seems like that one has a ways to go yet, I hope.

Keep writing. You have a very special gift.

Lol. Cecile
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