your a great auther completly beleiveble you should try a gaara and hinata one wink wink plz

I loved your fanfic. It's really well written and IC.
However, even if I'm not a hopeless romantic I missed a little bit of tenderness during their lovemaking.

Thank you for your attention and I'm a big fan of your fanfics.

wow. that was HOT!
lots of details...*gigglesquee*

great job :D

good job!

wow! English is your second language? i find that hard to believe. your English is far better than any of the other fanfic writers I've read so far. and it's their first language! i like how you wrote the story. it was well composed and thought out. i could tell that you thought this through. i enjoyed reading it. ^_^ it's so... umm... nice, and i love that they weren't completely out of character. yay! keep on writing!

Read this a long time ago and I decided to re-read it again! Still an awesome piece of writing!

i absolutely love this story! i've read it so many times and i love it each and everytime! keep up the amazing writing! ^_^

Wow. Not only were they in character, but the sex was hot, the sex was accurate, and they discussed birth control afterwards? Holy crap - I'm in awe. Looking forward to reading more by you.

love it! steamy story. and my fave pairing too ;)

To be honest, the story was well-written for someone who doesn't have English as a first language. There were a few spelling mistakes, but those could be easily forgiven. Your writing abilities overshadow your grammatical errors, to simply put it. I liked your portrayal of Kyouya and Haruhi. For some reason, it feels much more realistic than other works. The lemon in chapter two bothered me, but I'm never comfortable with them anyway. Overall, I loved it so much that I was able to read the whole thing in one sitting.

I love it!! Pleases pleases write more to it!!

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wow that was an amazing story. i really think that you should've continued it or at least wrote a sequel. so that us fans could find out where Kyouya and Haruhi's relationship goes. but other then that (and the few grammer and spelling mistakes; which we all have!) it was one of my favorite stories. and its already added to my favorite list. ill be looking for a sequal! or maybe a new interesting fic. GREAT JOB! :D

real good

really well written! Good job!