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| Chibified Eyes 2008-04-10 ch 12,  | abuseVery smart idea hehe. If you only followed the game storyline totally, it would be boring but I think this introduction of Krim and Co is gonna get very interesting... =D |
| dreamysherry 2008-04-04 ch 11, | abuseGood writing. Very much enjoyed your fic so far. Hope to see another update soon. |
| Chibified Eyes 2008-04-03 ch 11, | abuseWah cliff hanger! Lol, introducing romance into the story now are we? =D Great chapter, I can't wait to read more. |
| Chibified Eyes 2008-04-02 ch 10, | abuseAs usual, another great chapter. I love the way you ended it, with the beginning of Martin's entrance. |
| Pruit Igoe 2008-03-31 ch 10, | abuseI wish I could match your descriptive ability. Fantastic storytelling, and much more characterization than the usual DB story! |
| Fire Kunai 2008-03-31 ch 10, | abuseThat was excellent! First of all, let me congradulate you for such a well written, descriptive story. Very powerful with wonderful chapter length. I really hate reading stories when insanely long chapters >[ And I have noticed the utter lack of reviews you have received as well which really sucks, consider how good your story is =D Back to the matter at hand, Lucien's character is just perfect and I really adore Lielle so far. She seems very insecure of her abilities which is surprising really. Most DB stories that have a female main character always seem to be the same thing, a firery and fiesty girl that everyone seems to love ((Lucien Included)) Besides from Shorthands "A Nail On His Finger", Your story is the only one I have seen so far that has a rather believable female role. Anyways, just wanted to say that I really enjoyed your story and hope to see an update again soon ^^ Good luck with future Stories/Chapters Fire Kunai |
| Alora 2007-11-01 ch 9, anon. | abuseA really good story! Hope you will continue with it ... |
| Voration 2007-08-19 ch 9, | abuseGood chapter, she finally got the amulet to Jauffre! He is very shrewd so I can imagine that he will eventually figure out who Lielle works with-thats a confrontation I am looking forward to! ;) Update soon! |
| Lunatic Pandora1 2007-08-18 ch 9, | abuseLongswords makes the world go round! Anyway, I always thought it would be interesting if the main character would somehow manage to get the Dark Brotherhood to work for Martin against Dagon. I mean, I'm pretty sure they'd agree with a contract given by the whole of Cyrodiil against something that threatens all of them, no? |
| Chibified Eyes 2007-08-18 ch 9, | abuseAh, yet another amazing chapter. Keep up the great work! Hope you update soon! =D |
| Voration 2007-08-14 ch 8, | abuseWoo! Finally finished reading, I think the story so far is very good, so hurry up with the next chapter! |
| Voration 2007-08-13 ch 3, | abuseGood story so far, unfortunately I can't read the rest of it until another day-can't see the screen due to blurry eyed exhaustion hehe, but your take on the DB storyline is interesting so far! |
| Leya-chan 2007-08-12 ch 8, | abuseNice, nice another two chapters You make it really exciting, I look forward to read the next chapters, hope you continue ^.^ |
| Lunatic Pandora1 2007-08-11 ch 8, | abuseYeah that's right, be afraid now you bandits! Your final hour is at hand! Boahahaha, ahaha, coughcough... |
| Chibified Eyes 2007-08-10 ch 8, | abuseAh-wah! One excellent chapter after the next, you're amazing aren't cha? Mm well, let's see. Very good narration of the story. You use good descriptive language without overdoing it and the dialogue is very in-character for the Dark Brotherhood characters and believable. Once again, an amazing chapter. =D Update soon! |