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| Svadilfari 2007-11-26 ch 1,  | abuseAlright, so I know absolutely NOTHING about codes and computers but I still found this ever so hilarious. I can so see Dietrich sitting idolently at some cafe passing the time away till it's convienient and than BAM! He totally loses it with Tres. Suddenly, you remind the reader that for all his talents Dietrich is still a very young man. 'This is stupid' and 'Shut and die' pretty much did it for me. Only 'coz it came from him. And I did try my best to get the symbolism. Is it about his nature of 'like'? He likes a challenge, Isaak gives him one. And Cain. But, a Killing Doll? Nuh uh...Oh and his strings are useless on him. Really, you deserve more reviews. Please, please find inspiration to write more. There isn't enough good writers here and yes, writing madness well is a good! It's not all about cackling! |
| shunshou 2007-07-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseThe poor boy's so high strung - pun not actually intended. And he's right - Tres *is* just another gun, if a bloody good one. "He just killed somebody; it wasn’t like he stole someone’s work" = XD |