IT'S CALLED GRAMMAR AND A ** SPELL CHECK! I only found this cause of a friend, but let me tell you that this is a disgrace to the english language, I didn't even understand the plot and now I have a headache.

WHOOSH.

The title screams troll.

And you all fell for it.

I have to agree with all the other critics. Your stuff is rushed. Even the summary is no good because of spelling. Did you ever hear that "looks do matter" when it comes to writing and presenting it?

1) Please, get a spellchecker.
2) Get an English tutor if possible.
3) Do not do this on a governmental English exam when finishing high school; you'll regret it! University DOES NOT accept this PERIOD!
4) Stop butchering the characters. I love Sonic the Hedgehog but please, just stop! It's horribly done.
5) Spellcheck your profile.
6) I've published stories in a popular fandom around this same time of year and got less reviews than you. Damn... I think badfics are more attractive to people these days.
7) I cannot read your fic. It needs a WHOLE lot of re-write and proofing. Get a friend to help if necessary.

You've got a LONG way to go. Take this story down, fix it, re-check it and then repost it. It'll make a difference. If you refuse to take the time to do it right then call it quits, because nobody will like your fics.

This IS a joke. I am sure of it. I mean, c'mon!

"Come, come, my oysters! The day is warm and bright.
A little walk, a little talk, will be a sheer delight.

Come, come, my oysters! Let´s talk of many things:
Of shoes and ships, and sealing wax, and cabbages and kings."

...especially the last line always cracks one up, don´t you think?^^

Oh my...

Since the last story I reviewed, you seem to have gotten worse. Everyone's still out of character, the plot is now completely lost, your English is still absolutely horrific and now you seem to have reinvented Knuckles.

I have to agree with XxchiritarisuxX. You can't put stuff like this up and expect not to get blasted for it. Next time you write a story, proof read it, make sure you have spelled everything correctly. Also, don't use toilet humour. It's not funny, it's just completely stupid.

You're never going to be a writer with stories like these. Surely you can write better than this?

...You aspire to be a writer? Dude, you can't even spell "writing" right.

"Sonic halps fite eggmen"

Please tell me this is NOT the way you seriously write. Please tell me that this form of writing is your crude form of humor. Seriously. I'm not even going to compare you to an elementary school writer.

If you're going to put up a story, then don't put up this crap. Put up something that displays how great a writer you can be. Edit your story throughly before you submit it. Are you going to miss some mistakes? Probably. I know I miss some when upload the final drafts of my chapters. For you though, I would spend a lot of time checking spelling and grammar mistakes.

Please don't take this as a flame. This is constructive criticism. I hope you work to improve this story... a lot.

Tell this is a joke. At least learn to spell the NAMES RIGHT! Yeah, his name is EGGMAN. Tales is Tails. Kuckels is Knuckles. My, God.

You goon, this is something awful!

How old are you? I mean seriously... Next time, use spelling checks. ...I hope you improve...

If you're going to write stories you should learn how to spell. Or use the spellchecker. There are many other things wrong with this that I won't go into detail about but fixing up the spelling is at least a start.