nawww this was shaping up so well please do write more

Well thats very sad to hear another story ending for unknown amount of time. But I really enjoyed this story just so you know and i'm hoping that you do re-write it some time in the near future.

Toodles,

Hey! I respect your artistic rights, I just wanted to say that I really liked your story and I want to encourage you to keep writting please.

Sorry to hear your abandonding it, totally forgot about this storyline, was so good that did not bother to remove it from the alert list. Guess will be removing this storyline from the alert list...

Will have you on the Author Alert list just in case you decide to rewrite it.

Laters... and thx

I'm sorry to hear this story is abandoned as it has quite a lot of promise, but I understand that it's hard to write if you don't have an outline.

Thanks for at least letting us know.

Since it has been YEARS since this was updated, I think I can safely assume that this story is abandoned. A shame though because I found it a very interesting plot so far. Your use of comma's and question marks are still very confusing but then it has been years since you updated so I don't think my review will matter at all anyway.

I Really hope you plan to update this story soon because it is awesome! And you left off just before the reunion too! Please update!

interesting story

great story. keep writing. update soon. I can't wait to read more! This is getting interesting.

How is Remus and the others going to act with Set being a basilisk?

How can you WRITE parsel? Can you imagine how awkward it would be for a snake to write? If yoyu justified it a bit, maybe snakes slithered through sand a certain way and left a message, MAYBE, but...

Anyways, enjoying this!

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i wonder when you will be updating this story. you have said it is not finished nor that you have stopped writing it but you have not added anything in at least a year. please add more soon as you have a good story going here

It's been well over a year since you last updated, and you say that it's not abandoned yet no updates. Hope you update quickly.

this is a great story so far, i cant wait to see what happens next

If story not abandoned, and it is very good, then how about an update?