i like it but in the epasode alita didint know what hapend. if she was there that would mean she did.

Neh? WTF? Why are there monkeys around me trying to fry eggs? Mmkay, that was a very weird story...good try, though. BTW, Jeremie and Aelita were not at the pool during the attack in the show, so what are they doing here? Also, in the title it says the story was about Aelita and William. Where is William in this story, may I ask?

I got lost at 'bare chest' and now I'm in a weird town full of people with '!'s for heads.

I blame you for this.

Well that was... strange. There was no clear focus of the story, and it was absolutely random. Even though it's classified as humor/parody, I still gotta say, I'm not all that impressed.

I didn't really get it but it was an original try.

This is by far one of the WORST stories I have ever seen. What is it with people and making everyone use drugs!? It doesn't make sense(your story) and it makes a huge mockery of the show.

one of the most nonsence crazy yet funny one shots i have read only because is full of nonsence.

thank you, i really have a good time, you make me laugh.