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movieholic
2008-08-11
ch 17,
abuseSo I get bonus points? Perfect! This was so amusing and impeccable! I can't wait for the next chapter, this story keeps getting better and better!
movieholic
2008-08-11
ch 16,
abuseLoved the "This Is It" bit you added in there. I'm so glad there's another chapter after this one, I didn't want to stop!
Anna
2008-08-11
ch 17, anon.
abusefunny about the college student from UNL-I'm guessing your from nebraska?? if you are a fellow nebrasken(and cole lover) says hi!! love your story!!

oh yes and our marching band rocks too!!(hopefully our football team does as well this year)

Anna
Joleca
2008-08-11
ch 17,
abuseI'm so with you on the Broadway thing... My parents loved musicals and I grew up listening to all of the soundtracks... (and since my Dad was totally tone deaf and couldn't carry a tune at all, he actually enjoyed my versions of all the songs... you hear them that often, you've got them memorized!)

I love that Eddi finally got through to Cole and he's willing to open up and take a chance (and cute that he wanted to be "normal" for a day). She's really really good for him.

So, what do we get in the way of bonus points?? ;) that was such an easy guess...

Bring on chapter 18!!
Joleca
2008-08-11
ch 16,
abuseI love it... You've put the biggest smile on my face.. (and we all know who that "Australian guy" was!)

I'd write more, but I'm too eager to get to chapter 17 (see what happens when you put up 2 at once)..

later!!
Silvermoon77
2008-08-10
ch 17,
abuseKeep the fluff coming on :)
Silvermoon77
2008-08-10
ch 16,
abuseHaha! No one EVER ruffles Cole's hair. And most people wouldn't get away with it either. Now I'm stuck with an image of a tousle-haired Cole for the rest of the evening *snickers*
And lol, that music video with Julian in it is kinda hilarious too. You never fail to put a grin on my face xD
Wolf Emmpress
2008-07-29
ch 11,
abuseI meant how come in the review before.
Wolf Emmpress
2008-07-29
ch 10,
abuseNice story. Hoe come you didn't write more detail between Cole and Eddi in their little "one-night stand"?
Joleca
2008-07-17
ch 15,
abuseCole, worried, jealous and in love.. Unsure of himself and what he is feeling and how to deal with it... and Eddi the strong one, knowing who she is and what she is feeling and (even if Cole may think otherwise), being in control and being the lead..

He has so very much to learn (life, love, relationships...) and Eddi is the one to be there, teach him and help him through it all..

Can't wait for the next chapter
ethereal girl
2008-07-15
ch 15,
abusegreat to read from eddi again! unbelievable that Cole really voiced that he love her. guess he was as surprised as she? Looking forward to seeing if eddi moves in next to the halliwell and if Phoebe is as uninterested in their relationship as it seems.looking forward for more.
The Fabulous Mrs Cole Turne...
2008-07-15
ch 11,
abuseI loved this chapter! The Ask Phoebe storyline was brilliant!
The Fabulous Mrs Cole Turne...
2008-07-15
ch 5,
abuseHey,
Just found this and I'm loving it. Great work on the psychotic Cole revealing his demonic identity to the nearest poor soul to wander into his dwelling. :)
Silvermoon77
2008-07-14
ch 15,
abuseAha! Way to go, Cole and Eddi! I'm looking forward to where this might lead to. And coincidentally, I just happen to be reading Great Expectations at the moment for English class so I actually got the reference, lol. Oh, and bigger coincidence, I was visiting the Metropolitan Museum of Art in NYC this weekend and saw a collection of grandfather clocks on display. All I could think was, "Hope the Charmed writers don't get their hands on this batch!" XD
Mystic Archer Horse
2008-07-14
ch 15,
abuseNice, nice, very nice! I'm watchin' Hellboy so I need to go right now...I really liked the road it turned onto!

Later!
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