i've read the first two and i've read all eight chapters of the third part now I wonder... when is videl going to tell pan that gohan is her father and when shall they have peace with everyone alive. also I remember in the episode when goku went to get a new guardin and got dendea. He said he could make new dragonballs in 99 days but was able to make them in a few hours with the old dragon as a model so yeah just wondering since in part two you had turles destroy the dragonballs.

great story and series. please come back to it sometime

Please, continue soon! I just have to know what happens next! Gohan and Videl have to tell Pan who her dad is! Ah. The suspense is killing me!

Om cool ;O

I didn't like it when trunks died though ;(

10/10

HOW COULD YOU MAKE PETITE VIDEL CARRY A HEAVY TRUNKS! i mean, have you seen those muscles?

*sigh* i guess it's fine since it would be kind of wierd to have gohan carry him... now that i think about it, i forgive you.

BUT, not for killing my favorite purple-haired saiyan. THAT my friend must be followed by his resurrection! and soon too, i wanna get some tru/pan action, i'm a t/p fan after all ;p

Nice chapter! I wouldn't know how I would take the return of my loved one either especially if they're dead. I probably would've had a breakdown like Videl too. Anyways, I can't wait to see how Pan going to take that Gohan's her father since he's like 18. Again, good chapter and descriptions. Update soon -

Great chapter. I think Gohan and Kayla would've shown themselves to their family and friends, but great. Keep up the good work and update soon!

You definitly have to continue this! What's everyone going to say when they find out they're back! Please, update soon!

I am extremely interested in this story and i can't wait for your next update!