|Reviews for Fighting The Green|
| bakasaru264 10/29/11 . chapter 4
I agree with Harry. Why did they have to kill it anyway? I may not like those creatures but they deserve better...
Love your story. Really. The flow of the story and its logic, reasonings are far more better than those childlish ones out there in FF.
Please update soon.
| Kaylen Cooper 10/26/11 . chapter 4
I really like this! Looking forward to reading more. :)
| Herbal-Soda-Pop 10/15/11 . chapter 1
If you read this and still have the original story lying around somewhere please, please post it somewhere. This is m favorite story on this entire site its so real and well written. I would love to have a chance to re read the original.
| akuma-river 9/22/11 . chapter 4
Though I do wonder what was supposed to go here:
"Which," Lily smartly replied, "you shouldn't have done! Harry, those woods are dangerous. It's a wizarding woods, there are magical creatures everywhere. If you were in trouble, you should have found ."
"I know all about magical creatures," Harry mumbled from behind his spoon.
| ravel queen 9/22/11 . chapter 4
This is a very interesting start (I didn't read the original, so I will see all this with new eyes)
This scenario is somewhat of a staple, but I don't think they are a lot of really good ones and I'm really enjoying this especially how you show us why Harry is essentially the same person, while still different through circumstances.
I hope Ron and Neville will get another chance with Harry and vice versa (because I like them) but little kids can be so short-tempered.
Also liked the little glimpse of Neville we got to see here.
My only criticism: Please, please check your tenses! I honestly like your style so any mistakes are more glaring and you have in every chapter often at the end slipped into present tense and this really takes one out of the story, because its disruptive to the reading flow.
Looking forward to the next chapter
| Fireotaku18 9/14/11 . chapter 4
This is good! I hope to read more soon!
| Pypera 9/2/11 . chapter 4
Very intriguing story. Well done. Can't wait to see what happens next:).
| doodlechick12 8/28/11 . chapter 4
This is a very interesting story, and is very well written. I can't wait for more.
| Absolve 8/24/11 . chapter 4
Is this real life? AN UPDATE? I've been waiting so incredibly long for this moment ;_; And ohohoho, I think Harry just met with the incredible Lord Voldemort. Can't wait to see what happens next!
| craizypet 8/20/11 . chapter 4
nnnnwwwwwaaaaaaawwww! poor harry!
| KissthemoonDrapple 8/14/11 . chapter 4
interesting beginning... but I read a few of the reviews, and saw that this is a rewrite, are there any way for me to read the original one? cause it'll be easier to write meaningful reviews...
| kt 8/10/11 . chapter 4
Please update soon! I read the original story and just adored it, this version is so much more in-depth and riveting I cannot wait for more.
| BladesoftheValkyrie 8/9/11 . chapter 4
Wow, I love this story so gosh darn much. I am really enjoying reading it again. You create such a believable universe that I was cringing right along with Harry about the spiders. Keep up the fantastiic work! _
| I'S Watcher 8/7/11 . chapter 4
This story is so good! Pllleaaasee update soon :)
| MYsweetAngel 8/7/11 . chapter 4
:D hey! in LOVE with your fic! seriusly! :) love the plot and the way you're writing it!