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| c_baby 2008-01-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseaw cute. basch is a sweetie. i dunno if i understand tha last line but dats probaly just me haha. i dindnt know i would like these a story in sentences things but i do lol. dope job:) i loved tha dancing in tha rains part, too bad we dont get to see her dance in XII! 10/10 |
| sarasa cat 2007-09-03 ch 1, | abuseYay! Some Basch x Penelo. This pairing has a high cuteness factor and you definitely capture that, although there is also something very bittersweet in what you wrote. I enjoyed it, especially "#31 Book" because that is how I see them. Hopefully a few more people are converted to this OTP. ^_^ They need more fic. |
| Little Miss Cuteness 2007-07-22 ch 1, | abusethis is so sweet^^ i always find the Basch/Penelo pairing adorable, as age is just a number, and they work so well. the layouts really good, with the little unrelated points to hightlight their thoughts this is definiately one of the better Basch/Penelo fics i've seen~ |
| sorasheart281 2007-07-20 ch 1, | abuseEllo. =D I enjoy this couple, but you dont see much of them. D= IT ISNT FAIR. More work. >_> With these two, from you. >:O |
| bittersweet rhapsody 2007-07-20 ch 1, | abuseI adore Basch to no end. More fics like this are needed. This made me smiley. =] |