aw cute. basch is a sweetie. i dunno if i understand tha last line but dats probaly just me haha. i dindnt know i would like these a story in sentences things but i do lol. dope job:)
i loved tha dancing in tha rains part, too bad we dont get to see her dance in XII!
10/10

Yay! Some Basch x Penelo. This pairing has a high cuteness factor and you definitely capture that, although there is also something very bittersweet in what you wrote. I enjoyed it, especially "#31 Book" because that is how I see them.

Hopefully a few more people are converted to this OTP. ^_^ They need more fic.

this is so sweet^^ i always find the Basch/Penelo pairing adorable, as age is just a number, and they work so well.

the layouts really good, with the little unrelated points to hightlight their thoughts

this is definiately one of the better Basch/Penelo fics i've seen~

Ello. =D

I enjoy this couple, but you dont see much of them. D= IT ISNT FAIR.

More work. >_> With these two, from you. >:O

I adore Basch to no end. More fics like this are needed. This made me smiley. =]