I found it! Yayayayyyy this was wayyyy cute! I adore it! I'm tempted to read your other Dei/Saku story but I don't think your going to continue writing it. And I hate reading stories that aren't going to be finished. But excellent job an I will read some of your other stories that aren't on hold. Keep up the great work!

I certainly luvd this story at the Author Note i almost cried. I rly wanna c Dei-kun too. And plz do update ur Heart of an Artist Hands of a Killer because u friggin left it on a friggin cliffhanger .

Love,

Egshi

Nice

i was depressed when Deidara died too... and to be beat by Sasuke of all people.i like the sharingan it's cool and all but it seems like such a cheat the way Sasuke uses it. (i actualy like sasuke, he's just pissing me off a little more with each new episode though)

I was thinking u should do a spin off, of this xD It was so GOOD :D

awwwww... it is so cute!

if that story was a colour, it would the softest yellows and golds and whites of midday sun, when you are standing in a courtyard looking up at the sun, with your eyes half closed. or maybe when the sun sets, and a gold hue is cast over everything.

i know, so cliche, but thats how i see it.

Awww! I just cried. :( God! Your stories are turning me to mush! People are supposed to fear my reviews, you know? Beware the hard-ass. It's still in my nature though. Ugh. But anyways, this is the 2nd time I've cried. I also did when DeiDei-Kun died, yeah.

In the real story you should bring deidara back just for the hell of it. Like someone used a secret justu on him and he came back that would be AWESOME YO!

Loved it!

Deidara can be so kawaii when he wants to be :3

Wonderful . This was really good and I definitely prefer it to the original. Deidara is the best character ever... I decided that Kishi is the one writing the fanfiction, and we are the ones who really know what's going on! He can go and live in a toilet, he's a sexist pig anyway. Great story! Thankyou for posting it! x x x

So cute! Nice ending!

-sob- You made me cry!

Damn, I ADORE DeiSaku, especially when he's like this ;-;

Well, considering the placing of where this is taken from in the awesome then-trilogy, it's a bit OCC. Sakura's already in love with Itachi by this point and doesn't really see Dei-kun to be like that.

Ignoring that fact, I will try to save your ears and not scream too loudly. I am in LOVE with DeiSaku and this simply reinforces that fact. Oh, if only Kishi would have one of the Akatsuki kidnap Sakura... AND bring Saso-chan, Ita-kun and Dei-kun back to life. We must have that. Leader-sama would have to, too... Grr, I want my perfect Akatsuki puppets! (Which consists of Sakura, Sasori, Itachi, Deidara and Kisame, of course. They've always been my favourite members, even if Sakura isn't a member in the manga.)

I like how they're too shy to do anything, at first. Sort of reminds me of what Naruto and Hinata's first time will be like... I can imagine Hinata fainting. :]

Happily going to read another of your stories,

Miko-chan!

Ah, so good. 3

It should have seemed corny and out of character...but it didn't

Woah, intense and really good. I loved it :)

DDEC