Very interesting. I liked it.

Very cute.

I think you have a knack for getting the characters down. Ben and Sadie seem so IC that I wonder if you write for the dialect the characters use helps me form a picture in my minds' eye of what is going picture you produced is crisp and clear no extra effort to shade in the scene was needed.

Oddly enough A friend of mine spent three hours stuck in the highschools elevator ,so this connected with me on a personal level.

Vimmi

Awesome story

I luved it! soo good!

wow this is a good story you should continue it i dont know why people stopped making ben and sadie fanfics