Hey,

I recently started to like the Hermione/Bill ship and that is how I found your story. I really enjoyed reading it, there was everything in it, adventure, love, humour. So yes very well done, I am going to check out your other stories now too :)

A very lovly story, good job!

cute! i felt soo bad for bill! i love his character! good fic! kudos on a job well done!

you said in the beginning that your english is very poor but i think you did a wonderful job on this chapter, i don't know if it's been beta'd since then but it's still a really good first chapter and i can't wait to read the rest of this :) thanks for writing it, there aren't enough bill/hermione stories...out of all the weasleys i see her with either him or charlie...don't know why, they're just my favorites on the pair ups with the weasleys

Aww I loved this :D

lol :) I loved it!!
~Rushingriver

I'm really enjoying the story so far; the idea of the story is really good.

Okay, I liked the story line very much, but I'm afraid I didn't very much like the ending. Too much angst. The story should have ended when he said he loved her. She shouldn't have run away, that just makes Hermione look like a wimpy little girl who is afraid to face the truth. And we all know that is not Hermione Granger at all.

So this is my third time reading and reviewing...I stumbled across this story again, and had to let you know how I felt about it...again.

It really is fantastic, you did a great job. And as for your comments about your "very crappy English" - your English is great! You wrote this story a lot better than some native English speakers would have. There are just a few subtle nuances that you slipped up on, but nothing major.
If you ever need someone to help with your English, or beta read for you, I'd be more than happy to help you. I'm a grammar nerd, and I'm always willing to help someone out. Just let me know! :)

wnoderful

Beautiful story, loved Bill, loved Hermoine! Fantastic!

Keep writing!

I enjoyed reading this very very much! It was so well written, the plot was amazing and you made things between them develop so nicely. I loved your characterizations, too. Nicely done!

I really liked it!! Bill is one of the most interesting characters ever :D

amazing.
i love it :D

Very nice. I liked how Hermione became a Cursebreaker.