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| Vullinia 2008-03-02 ch 3,  | abusereally interesting, how come some people in there world have daemeons and not others |
| Sorrel A La Mode 2008-01-26 ch 3, | abuseWhen I first read this story I was excited and disappointed. I was excited because, well, it`s a Torchwood/HDM crossover. Who wouldn`t get excited? Now, I was disappointed beause you`re a little mind-reader. I had a idea for a DW/TW/HDM xover, in which both Owen and Rose have daemon. I feel like I should ask premission to use an idea s similar to your`s, so that`s what I`m doing. May I? |
| Mattora 2007-09-08 ch 3, | abuse:rofl: Ah, love the little ferret lady, she is so damn right about Gwen XD Love little story!! |
| Mattora 2007-09-08 ch 2, | abuseCUTE!! Ah, I feel like Tosh and Gwen :D Why can't people have daemons in real live? Would make things so much easier! |
| Mattora 2007-09-08 ch 1, | abuseMore! I really like the first part :) I have been a very big fan of the HDM books, and Owen with a daemon is just pefect! But could you please edit the first chapter? The bold + underlined thing makes it a bit uncomfortable to read .__., which is a shame for such a nice story! |
| JennMel 2007-08-01 ch 3, | abuseThis is really good! You really made it fit in with Owen's character, and I liked Jack's reaction when the truth dawned. Helbreda's opinion of Gwen was my favourite part thought:) You need to watch the formatting though. Part of the first sentence is cut off due to the link you try to post, and it also makes the whole chapter bold and underlined, which is weird to read in. Nevertheless, great job! |
| Hazelayes 2007-07-23 ch 3, | abuseAww! That is sweet, and so Owen, to my way of thinking. I see him as a passionate man who is desperately trying not to care about others, his colleagues in particular, probably because of childhood experiences and what he was wrongly taught was the way for "men" to behave. So your crossover and the childhood clues you gave us fit my vision of him. Characters must have "issues" ;) and Owen's anger and impatience mirrors my own response to difficulty much more than any of the others. I'm growing to like Owen much more than I expected to. Thanks for sharing. |
| LizaGirl 2007-07-21 ch 1, | abuseLove it, there definetely isn't enough torchwood out there. Have you seen the whole first season or are you watching it on Channel 10? Sucks to be behind the times in Australia? doesn't it. Anyway, please keep writing Love Liza |
| Hazelayes 2007-07-21 ch 2, | abuseI wasn't too sure of this at first (I'm not a fan of the Dark Materials books) but it is a charming idea and seems to fit very well with Owen's character. I think you've got most of the characters down well, but Owen's of course is most true. Please continue with this. I like it very much. :D |