I really likes this, ta1nt3d1uv. I liked the Kyle-Cassie interection, though she is not a favorite of mine, and Tom's suspicion.

Cassie looked to be choosing her words carefully, "We have some things to chat about and I like coffee shops. There's always interesting people there."

"Yeah, great idea. They can all see me talking to myself. I'll be the interesting person."

Excellent dialogue. Good job. You've written Kyle well.

Who is Claire and what is her connection to the future?

What kind of doctor appointment, not at NTAC or with Jordan would have anything to do with her Promicin?