Another lovely series. I really ope you do Ren/Sui background story one day. Your writing just draws me into these characters. ^_^

I so wanted to see them turn the tables and have Ban and Jak walking in on them in the end lol.

I really have to stop staying up too late reading these. :o

WE I finished another story! And might I say that it was quite an enjoyable read ;) I espescially liked letter E is for Eternal. It was so sweet!! Awesome job like always and this one will go down in the favourites. Keep it up!

All I really have to say about this is that oxygen tents must suck.

I like how you pointed out that the band of seven isn't all just some fluffy fun group. They do kill, rape, and plunder, no matter what raeders may coose to believe. Although, in that time period, you did what you could to survive.
I also like how you portrayed Jyakotsu and Bankotsu's relationship to be more explosive than you usually do.

The final line, "You have no idea how impatiently I've waited for this day" Seems a little over the top. Still, good story. It made me laugh, especially the refrences to Kyo eating Jyakotsu's other cats.

Other than using the phrase 'the perfect gift for Bankotsu' twice in the first paragraph, I couldn't find any problems with it. I like how Jyakotsu decided to wear the scarf around his neck instead. It explains why he's wearing it in the manga too.
I'd never thought of Suikotsu as being married. He isn't a character that's often explored to deeply.
I like how you keep with the manga's (Or Anime's?)idea of Jyakotsu being bad at math. It makes sense that he wouldn't know it too well because education wasn't widespread in that time.

Again, another chapter with wonderful characters! I love how you portray al of them, even Renkotsu. The dialouge was still a little shaky though, but even so, this is a great story!

Wow...This was definitely different. Most of the fics I've read so far don't really have a father figure for Jyakotsu, or portray him as being an abusive drunk that only serves to fill the story with needless angst. This was incredibly insightful, as well as being a fun look at a crossdressers ensemble.

This chapter is really good! I like how realistic you made the final one seem!
And you know that the pink bunny is a metaphor for gay men right? The drum symbolizes his lover that he bangs like a drum on and on and on. Or, at least, that's what I've heared.

I liked this one, but not as much as the others. The name changing made it less believeable, and some of the dialouge was pretty stiff.
Still, great job!

Aww... This made me cry. My cat died last week... It also made me laugh though, so great job! Keep up the good work!

Aww... That was really cute! I like Jyakotsu's nickname for Bankotsu... And that you use the word 'nookie'. It's such a fun word!

I have never heared the term "Ox eyes" before, but it brings up excellent mental pictures. It's so awesome how you wrote all the characters out, Great job! Sorry it took so long for me to read it, but things have been crazy. I can't wait to read the next chapter!

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