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Cadence's Way
2009-11-12 . chapter 18
WOW...I stumbled upon this two days ago and haven't been able to stop reading it. I am usually not a Hermione fan, but I loved this story. Your descriptions of their characters was perfect. Great writing.
kerplank
2009-10-25 . chapter 18
Wonderful story! Loved every little bit of it.
ebonyeyez1
2009-09-24 . chapter 18
What a wonderful story!
slitherinlove
2009-04-05 . chapter 18
hmm... that was...
interesting. i can't figure out if i loved it or hated it.

you are an amazing writer though!
WINtEr SuMmEr AuTuM SpRiNg
2009-03-29 . chapter 18
great story i love how u planned it out just like a real author wel keep the good books comming
smaginn
2009-01-23 . chapter 18
brilliant-- i just love it, the draco/ginny moment was just a bonus! i never thought of marcus/ hermione, though i do read blaise/ hermione. i think this threeway thing really worked out, it didnt seem awkward or anything, it seemed natural, and it was just brilliant.
croquette
2008-11-14 . chapter 18
i can't believe that people demanded an update...god..
i just wanted to say that i've been glued to my screen since i started to read your story 2 days ago...
i just loved it!!
NixterNZ
2008-08-26 . chapter 18
I have really enjoyed reading this story. Glad I came across it after it was finished as I like to read stories in one hit. Hope you have started the companion as I would really like to know how they all end up - happily ever after I hope.
amaltia
2008-08-18 . chapter 18
Aww how sweet. I'm glad everything worked out okay, although it would've have been interesting to see a combined seduction of Hermione with Blaise and Marcus cornering her!
I really enjoyed reading this--it would be fun, too, to read a little more of Ginny's deal and exploits with Draco!
JaceDamian23
2008-08-17 . chapter 18
Most importantly, though, there was her boyfriend.

i'm confused you keep on switching i. boyfriend. husband. which is it?


With some effort, the pale blond man finally succeeded in staggering past Blaise only to immediately trip over his own feet once he was actually inside the hallway. Hermione watched in horror as he spun, flailed, and eventually managed to crash into Ginny, who had just appeared from the kitchen. The small woman stood no chance of remaining upright, and a heartbeat later she ended up laying flat on her back on the floor.

There was a horrified silence, during which Malfoy groggily lifted his head, peered thoughtfully at the woman beneath him, and then announced in distaste, “Oi, Blaise. I hate to be the bearer of bad tidings but you appear to have an infestation of vermin. Look! I’ve caught a weasel.”

To Hermione’s irritation, Blaise burst into laughter in response. She shot him a hard look but he did not seem to notice. He had finally retrieved his key and was very carefully closing the door.

Hermione’s gaze flitted back to the pair on the floor. Ginny was still struggling to get out from underneath Malfoy, but the blond man did not appear interested in moving – at least not immediately, anyway.

Ginny growled and narrowed her eyes at Malfoy’s increasingly amused expression. “Get off me!” she exclaimed angrily, shoving at his shoulders as she did so.


lmfao thats a funny part. aha



lol its funny because blaise basically accused hermione without actually accusing her of cheating on him and He has been cheating on her


“Traitor,” Blaise mumbled.

“I’m just telling the truth.”

“That must be an interesting experience for you.”

“It certainly would be for you.”

lol


“It would be!” Marcus growled. “I don’t know what you take me for… I’m not just interested in listening to my cock if that’s what you think. I care about you – I left my wife for you.”


Good part
Sad though

Stepping away again, Ginny tilted her head to one side and said, “Well, you’re back together again, aren’t you?” She glanced behind Hermione, who assumed that she was looking towards Blaise. Brown eyes narrowed almost hostilely, “You are, aren’t you? You’ve not managed to make an arse out of yourself again, have you?”
Blaise gave an indelicate snort. “Don’t worry about my arse when you have one of your own to be concerned about.”


Lol



“It wouldn’t be lying,” Blaise objected. “Ably is a maid. Well, sort of, anyway.” He looked towards Hermione who had returned to folding her clothes and placing them neatly into the trunk. “We’re keeping her, by the way.”
Hermione looked at him in surprise. “Blaise…”
He shook his head. “I’m putting my foot down.”
Her mouth dropped open. “You’re what?!” she exclaimed.
“You heard.”


Lmfao



Blaise smirked knowingly. “Say hi to Ginny’s guest, if you see him.”
Marcus returned the smirk. “I’ll buy the sneaky git a bloody big drink,” he said, and then left.


Lol


Fork in hand, Ginny had grinned broadly at her over the kitchen table and said, “You know, if you’re looking for someone to thank for your recent good fortune then you might what to cast your eye in the direction of your favourite redhead.”
“Ron?”
Ginny snorted. “Ron would never have the wit or intelligence to plan something like this. He certainly would not have been brave enough.”


Lol



His smile widened. “Don’t you want to touch?” he asked. His voice was rough, and at the sound of it a strangled sound escaped Blaise.
Hermione arched an eyebrow and very deliberately avoided looking at Blaise. “I don’t know,” she said. “I mean, I’m not sure he deserves it.”
“What?” Blaise exclaimed.
“You might have a point,” Marcus agreed, ignoring his boyfriend’s astonished expression. His eyes sparkled. “He hasn’t earned it, has he?”
Hermione felt a line of tension run down her spine. She could not quite believe that Marcus was actually playing along. “He really did mess us around,” she agreed.
“If it hadn’t been for him then this situation might have been resolved far sooner.”
Nodding her head, Hermione eased closer to the pair. Reaching out, she tugged at the sheets and watched as it slid down the line of Marcus’ bare back until it was settled dangerously low. Shifting onto her knees, she leaned across and caught his mouth, though only briefly. “Maybe he shouldn’t get to play at all,” she whispered.
“Hey!” Blaise cried. “I apologised. I did! Hermione…” He struggled to sit up but Marcus still had his hands fastened tightly around his wrists. Seemingly without any extra effort the bigger man held him down.
Marcus grinned slyly. “I knew there was a reason that I fell for you. Did you have anything specific in mind?”
Hermione had not, but she tilted her head to the side and said, “Maybe,” anyway. What had followed had left her blushing for days.


Loved that part.hot and amusing



I LOVED your story hun
it was cute
sad
and nicely written
wish there was more
nice job
WishfulWhispers
2008-08-12 . chapter 18
A wonderful epilogue, and I look forward to the companion story for this!

Emma
WishfulWhispers
2008-08-12 . chapter 17
Fantastic chapter, I still love how consistent your charactres are!

Emma
Monnbeam
2008-08-02 . chapter 18
Great last chapter can't wait for it companion to start.
Erytha
2008-07-28 . chapter 18
theres gna be a sequel? is there is tgere? congrats of finishing the story!!
ebbe04
2008-07-28 . chapter 18
I can't believe that it's over!
I thought that you did a good job with the ff... but I wish the epilogue would of had more info in what happened to them later on in the future.
Good luck with another other ff's that you decide to write!
-- Liz
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