...And then he muttered words that she didn’t understand, something… Latin maybe?

HAHAHA! I loved that! The story was kind of predictable (if I could only spell...) but altogether good. It was well written unlike most of the crap that is on this site and you certainly did have good ideas. I hate Lily though. I just do... James is MINE! Not HERS! *coughs* Anyway, back to the point, it was very cute how the whole story fit together. I was thinking "what the heck does this have to do with Harry Potter besides Tom and the Lily/Petunia sister thing?" but now I see. lol.

"When you're eleven I promise you can be a witch too." THAT'S SO CUTE! aw! But I still HATE Lily...

All the best,

Nacima

darn it! that is SUCH a teaser! write more!

oh my gosshhh that was great! there had better be a sequal!

that was VERY good! plz write more!

This is really good, an interesting story! Hope you write more soon!

THAT WAS REALLY GOOD BUT GET ON WITH THE SECOND CHAPTER PLEASE

this is x-cellent! i wish i'd thought of something like this, it's so original!

Oh, gosh, you are good. Keep on goin'! Please!

Thats a pretty kool idea having lily as the heir of grindlewald, it'd be good if james potter was the griffindor heir or sumthin then it goes to harrys present or sumthin and he finds his history out in sum nightmares or sum e like that :P

Nice beginning. Poor Daisy.