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Neeps513
2009-11-09 . chapter 2
ahahahahaha! LOVE IT! and no I didn't get the whole "matilda" thing! Yes, I am that blonde! ;)
Saltfisk
2009-01-20 . chapter 2
I think this is the fourth or fifth time I'm reading this, and I really like it. I have a secret love for fics where Severus has a brother/clone/thing, and the entangelments those two and Hermione can get into.
I'm really very fond of this fic, although it, for me, has some things working against it; for exampel in the A/N at the end of chapter one, you mentioned some things that could/should have been incorporated into the story. You've also written the story in a very Bridget Jones-ish way, goofy, talkative, clumsy lead woman, and all, and I usually avoid that in a fic, but you made it work.
I think this story has potential to be rewritten with more chapters and a bit more drama. This story is very good, don't get me wrong, all I'm saying is that it could be interesting see what could happen with the plot if it was written in a different way.
Still, this is one of the stories I go back to several times, because it has that little something that makes a story good to me!
Sam Carter McKay
2008-06-17 . chapter 2
OMG that was priceless. Wonderful ending, I was in stitches the whole way through.
potterhasnothingoncullen
2008-06-12 . chapter 2
More? Plz? A little more? 1 chapter? half a chapter? heck, a QUARTER of a chapter? PLZ?
JasmineT
2008-05-30 . chapter 2
OMG that was so funny! Luved it
Evelyns Journey
2008-03-10 . chapter 2
Giggles! That last part cracked me up! I swear my family thinks I'm crazy...

Excellently done! hehehehehehe, so cute! This fan fiction made me very happy good work!
debjunk
2008-02-28 . chapter 2
Very cute story. I was wondering how you'd get it all worked out in two chapters, but it worked really well. Some parts were so funny I laughed out loud.
Arabella Lee Smith
2008-02-11 . chapter 2
I loved hermione thinking, "I need new friends."

And i didn't realize who Matilda Malkin was. I see some of the other reviewers did. I'll plead late hours. after all, this is my bedtime story tonight. Thanks for sharing.
Cardio Necrosis
2008-02-02 . chapter 2
Yeah, I kinda figured that Madam Malkin would be Matilda, however I thoguth it was strange Ginny had deja vu with "Snape's brother" but that was probably jsut from my over-analytical mind. Great work! thsi was hilarious. I liked the part when Ginny thoguth Snape was icarus, and they were comparing him to himself. That was hilarious. I would ahve killed Harry had he doen taht to me, shouting out wh oI was in love with! LMAO!

Great job, written very well. Loved it.
Cardio Necrosis
2008-02-02 . chapter 1
Hmm, intriguing . . . I liek it so far. I liek how Hermione sorta made a fool of herself, but in an endearign way. She's so cute! Aw! I like Icarus, too, he seems like an endearing chracter. Very interesting . . . I wonder why Ginny got deja vu with him, though . . . I really like the characterization and the way it's written.
Sterenig
2008-02-01 . chapter 2
I loved that story ! Icarus is really great and Severus plot is well thought ! Thanks for the nice reading moment !
jen3572005
2008-01-20 . chapter 2
cute story, is there more or are you finished?
KimJo
2008-01-09 . chapter 2
great and funny. especially loved hermione's internal (and Not so internal) dialogue! thanks so much
Midnight's Requiem
2007-12-29 . chapter 2
This was such a cute story! Loved it...
excessivelyperky
2007-12-29 . chapter 2
I think you meant 'bollocks'--bullocks, I believe, are cattle.

Other than that, it was wicked, brilliant and one of the loveliest train wrecks in progress I have been happy to witness.

Do update soon!
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