 zylaxidia 2007-07-27 . chapter 1 This is Zylaxidia, by the way. Sorry for not being able to review earlier!
This is a fascinating fic. It's refreshing to see Crabbe and Goyle not depicted as idiots, and I really enjoyed that. I loved the concept, and the pairings.
The set-up was a bit abrupt. You sprung all the other pairings on us rather unexpectedly, but carried the Crabbe/Neville one out very well. I was surprised at Hermione's OOCness, but I suppose that works. The fic's ending was adorable, but left a few loose threads. What about Voldemort and Lucius? What happens? What about the kids?
Other than that though, I really liked this fic. Can't wait to see more of your stuff. |