A very interesting first chapter, full of action and excitement. I like Dan & Lisa's relationship - are they really just good friends?

Kale is interesting, too - a powerful warrior from - where? Can't wait to find out.

Wow... this is one long fic. And yet... yet... IT RULES! I'm sorry I never got around to reading yoru fics before (I hate to admit it, but I'm not a big Final Fantasy 8 fan. I love all the others, but 8...). You so faithfully read mine, so now I'm returning the favore. You're seriously a good author! I'll admit, a few things annoyed me ("said the young punk" is on the list), but other wise great! Write some more fanfics! And make sure they're not about FF8! :-) See ya later, buddy!

*clapping* woooo! WOW! That's all I can say. I really enjoyed your story, Brent! I liked the plot line, but most of all, I loved your original characters. The depth you put into them was great, and I wouldn't mind seeing them in another story. but, alas, i think you may have retired good ole Lisa and Dan. :) but anyway, you should keep on writing. you've got talent, and I think you should use it.

-Rejeana

Hey!

this is a great piece of work you've got going here! you've got a flare for battle scenes; most that i have read are choppy, yours flow really well.

and i can see that your co-author agrees with me in thinking Rinoa is somewhat of a flake. :D

sorry that i havent finished it yet, but I will! maybe i'll read a chapter every time i get online or something like that. anyways, keep up the good work!

*squeals* I got thanked! You are very much welcome Brent! It was a pleasure and a thrill to help you out with WoF. It's sad it had to come to an end, but it was a very fitting end. _ Great job once again!

Whoo, this is great, Brent! I know I've read this before, but this is still great every time I read this! Onto the epilogue! Or chapter 10! _

Wow.

First of all, I love the original characters. You give them depth and a personality all their own. I'm really liking Lisa, she's one tough chick! :)

Kale is awesome. I love the "take charge" attitude that you gave him. I can't wait to see what happens with him next.

I've only read chapter 1, but I'm hooked now. I've got to go to class, but I WILL finish this once I get back!

Hello. I just went back through my reviews and realized that I hadn't reviewed you back like I had promised. I'm sorry!

Anyway, I really enjoyed reading your fic...you're a great writer! This story is amazing!

Try putting a blank line inbetween lines of conversation to make the story easier to read.

Woah! This was good! _

How do you make your chapters so long? I can never make mine long at all. :'(

Hey I love how this story is going to far even if I've only gotten to chapter 3 yet. Keep up the good work mon ami!

Nice intro for Seifer, also wanted to comment that Kale is remarably cool headed (most of the time) hehe

Hey! This is really good. I especially like Kale's attitude and the way he deals with things. No push over there. Keep writing!

AWW! Zechariah! Very bad of you, Brenton (but well written - lol!) I think the character that I'm really liking in this one is Lisa. You bring much depth to your original characters and they're fun to get to know. Two thumbs up!

Hey, great chapter brent! Lovin' it! _

O Wow...cool chapters(2-6) and I guess I can just about manage to patiently wait for the next one!