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Reviews For: Riptide

Akemi Hime
2008-10-07
ch 1,
abuseWell done!
The mood was set so right and the way you descried the both of them... very nice.
Hope you'll write another Kiri/Yagyuu fic anytime soon.
with love - fred
2008-09-11
ch 1,
abuseI love these two in fics together. If I had my right mind, I would write them, too. But I don't. And I love the way you've written them. Instead, I'll just settle contently from having read this.

Fabulous writing job. And I love how... although unintentionally... it was posted on my birthday.

:]

Happy writings~ (/^ ~ ^)/
The Blue Penguin
2007-07-21
ch 1,
abuseThe ending was very intriguing. Your descriptions were wonderful and the setup of the mood was nicely done. I liked the interaction between Akaya and Yagyuu. ^^
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