this is a great piece, to go with the other great piece! well done, to both of you for a really good piece of writing.
sorrel

Love it love it! keep going!

yes...please continue. i love the carter's POV, it just adds so much to luara's story.

tori

great! oh, how you must continue!

:)

Wow. I really enjoyed that - which suprised me. ;) I haven't read any decent fanfiction on this joint for longer than a while. :) I *would* love for you to write more - and I'd *love* to host it up on my site - .com. Really well written. I enjoyed it, thank you. :)

This is a very interesting story! It's very well written. Please continue!

awww, this is great, i read them both and I really liked this as well!

As a Luby, I don't normally read Carby fics, but this was actually pretty good.

Continue, continue, continue! That was great!

Liz

Aww. Very deep. Please continue! Carby! ::giggles:: Woooooohooooooooo!