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| notesofwimsey 2007-07-31 ch 1,  | abuseOkay - I've been reading and recommending all your stories, but i was traveling and coldn't get enough time to review. So here is the FIRST, but I will try to get to all of them! I laughed out loud at this line: He looked at her as if she had three heads. “Ya kidding? Pop would have killed me if I even considered that. He’d have me up in Ontario playin’ for the Toronto Blue Jays before I put on a Yankees uniform.” I only have to watch baseball when the Jays get into the Series (which is so seldom even I don't mind!), so that really tickled me. The voices, the emotion, the sweetness all make this a perfect set up for your series - I love it and all the ones that came after. Great job. |
| mabelreid 2007-07-25 ch 1, | abuseI'm trying to get caught up on the stories you've done that I have missed. I like your perspective on DL. Of course a healthly dose of fluff is always appreciated. Love the proposal at second base, somehow that is just so Danny. Well done |
| Dantana4ever 2007-07-22 ch 1, | abuseVERY GOOD! I loved it! COntinue writing!! :-D! |
| DAnNSfreak 2007-07-22 ch 1, | abuseWho! Yay! Great to have another DL fan out there! I love this story... rich in M&Ms with a sprinkling of Danny's past! Nice one! |
| ReJo 2007-07-21 ch 1, | abuseThis is very sweet! |
| Susan1302 2007-07-21 ch 1, | abuseHow cute :D I loved it. Really good for your first fanfic ;) |
| squintsquad03 2007-07-21 ch 1, | abuseYay! That was really sweet. I can picture Danny proposing on a baseball diamond. Good call with the Mets. :) |
| johnteylafan 2007-07-21 ch 1, | abuseThat was just perfect... loved it..thanks for sharing |
| GRACE5 2007-07-20 ch 1, | abuseperfect...loved it! |