A www I love this :)

Well, let me start by saying that I’ve never played the game, so if nothing makes sense, that’s why. . . Love the Cat with the accent, makes me all warm inside. Their interaction was snarky and seemed natural. Loved the “I’m no’ a kitten lass, I’m a cat.”

Ah yes superb. Excellent.

OOH! I like this story! Please continue!

LMAO! Brilliant, absolutely marvelous! If this is supposed to be continued please do!

That was f'ing awesome! I was just playing Alice a minute ago and I was at the waterfall in the game I started yesterday and I decided to try and find a fanfiction, and I thought it was hilarious that I found your story and it just happened to be about the same spot. Ok... Maybe it wasn't THAT funny but anyways awesome story, I agree about the whole hint of flirtation thing.

you SEVERELY need to write more. more sexy Chesire-human kissing Alice ness-stuff

Very good and creepy, write more.

This is a great story its Beautifully worded you could write book!

Aw..._
And don't think it's sick, I love Cheshire/Alice romance, and so do a lot of others. It's said that Lewis Carroll fashioned Cheshire after himself, and there's good solid evidence he loved Alice. SO there.
Good story, please continue, unless it's meant to be a one-shot?

Very inspiring! I love it!

After all the bloody times I fell off that stupid waterfall in the game, if something like this had occured I probably wouldn't have sworn so much at the screen. Awsome story! You got Alice done perfectly.

Thsi is what I was exactly looking for! Im al thimbs up fro alice/chesire fanfiction! b_d

Knwo where can i fidn more? maybe another vignette?

Great. Nicely written. A bit confusing in first-person; third-person, but overall, the story was great.

That was cute, I liked it. Unexpected, but that's never a bad thing.