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EmpyrealFantasy
2007-11-24 . chapter 1
You made me wibble. ;__;

Youreviewed on my best friend's fic, and I was curious to your icon and clicked... et cetera et cetera, here we are.

I just wanted to tell you that was unbeleiveably heartbreaking. The emotion was lovely. :)

One comment I have, though, is Sasuke's thoughts on 'murder'... as a ninja, for anyone but Naruto, isnt that an oxymoron? It is what they do. Now, murder in cold blood ot for revenge, yes I can see... but it seems twisted for Sasuke (even if he hadn't killed hundreds under Orochimaru) to say 'only the most vile of beings'.

Again, though, your capute of emotion was gorgeous. :)
Tiger-chan
2007-07-25 . chapter 1
Wait...So who died? Sakura or Naruto? You didn't make that very clear, at least not to me
Tabansi232
2007-07-21 . chapter 1
Now I see whre the confusion came in. You would immediately assume that Naruto died, but then at the the "other memember of Team Seven" says that they feel like having some ramen to eat. That's when the reader assumes that it is Naruto who is Sasuke's lover at the moment.

Now, if the readers remember the scene, then they would recall Sakura trying to be the one to stop them. If Kakashi had gotten there too late, Sakura would have been killed.

Anyways, great oneshot! The intake on Sasuke is very deep, and it's nice to hear a change of perspective from him. I enjoyed it very much. :)

Your awed idiot,
Brandy
Tazeredfrog
2007-07-20 . chapter 1
So Um question, who died?
Was it Naruto? Cause it seems like it, but then it seems like Sasuke's lover is Naruto, so then it would be Sakura or Kakashi that died, right? It was good, I'm just confused as to who is who. *faints*
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