lol that was great. i love how the parents are listening and watching over them

That was really good. The parents are really funny.

XD hehehe sweet! XD oh my god i love it! sequel!

yay!

This was so sweet! I loved Neji's confession!

OH MY GOSH! i read this story a few months ago and loved it! i didnt realize it was the same author! great job!

Hyuuga. Okay. It's Hyuuga. (But I do it with one 'u'.) Graveyard is one word. No comma after "maybe". No dash in between "team" and "mate". It's just together. Only three dots before "her future husband." A comma after "says" where "Do you wish..." comes after that. It's shook, not shake. Can you explain the guide thing a bit more clearer, don't get it.

As for the story...

Lovely. Absolutely lovely. Not too revealing, and then it slowly turns into something more. Yes. Love it. Yeah.

tat was so sweet! I cried :')

this is my FAV story u've written holly...u rock so hard i love u! :)

i get im mean people have to be kinda dumb not to get that...i mean seriously...

wow...ok...that was um random cilcking for me just random stories but nice story i realy liked it

I really love for this to be a multi chapter...but I don't know if it would work. It's just a great idea, and very cute and something I would deffinatly continue reading...soo yeah! Good job

I actually love it i thimk u r one of my fav wruters! and trust me i judge hard! Keep up the good work! now im off 2 read more of ur writings!

I LOVED IT! it's so kawaii!

Don't apologize cause this is pretty good. I liked how Tenten's parents are like her and Neji.