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| Princess-Atemu 2008-08-17 ch 4,  | abuseThis chapter was wicked! that was a brillaint idea for her to see him without a shirt, and the father in the starie reminds me of my father! ugh. Anyway! keep writing i love the story so far! |
| lilypop8 2008-06-14 ch 4, | abuseAww i want more chappters please its really good i really hope you do put in more chappters and keep writing please and thankyou? ok bye bye |
| Princessdarkfairy 2008-05-24 ch 4, | abuseHey, keep writing, I LOVE you're story!! Keep up the good work!! I love how you're including some of the Japanse language as well!! Good Luck!! |
| TwiDawnLight 2008-03-29 ch 4, | abuseKawaii! Such a cute story please continue! |
| Wrath of Flames 2008-03-28 ch 1, | abuseHaha. Sorry, I was just busy laughing at your pathetic attempt at a fanfic. Wow. The crap on my dad's car outside can write better than this. Come on. *Laughs* The reason your story is being flamed is because of one of the following reasons: 1: You just can't write. 2: Your spelling and grammar is crap. Literally. 3: Your A/ N is longer than your story. 4: You have no plot... 5: ... FORGET THIS CRAP! Basically, you suck. Your writing sucks. Your ideas suck. Your plots suck... so do us all a favor and delete this so our eyes can stop bleeding. I think I'm the new Moses now... I just made an entire river... To sum it up babe, your writing can be compared to a 2-month old blind baby chimpanzee with ADD. And still, I'd think I'd go with the monkey... -Love ya'! --WRATH OF FLAMES |
| EmoLollipop 2008-03-27 ch 4, anon. | abuselol i think her dad is just a teensy bit paranoid XD |
| Mew Mai 2008-03-27 ch 4, | abuseThis is so col! I love the plot lines so far! Onegai,update son! Onegai! |
| Kish's Kittie 2007-07-21 ch 3, | abuseYay! The name works perfectly!^^ Aw, you gots 2 meet Ryou!^^ ~Happy Writings! |
| Kish's Kittie 2007-07-21 ch 1, | abuseI don't know if this title is any better, but it just came to me: 'Swallowed In Love By Blue Eyes'. Let me know what you think!:-) -Dewa mata! ~Happy Writings! |
| -Mew Mew Momo- 2007-07-21 ch 2, | abuseI only just realised you had that up. Thats so good so far continue please *does my puppy dog eyes* No one can resist them MWAHAHAHA! xD |